Two Different Poles
katauta contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This katauta, Two Different Poles, is set up properly and brings the magnetic forces to bear on the attraction aspects of love. Opposites somehow attract each other.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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This katauta, Two Different Poles, is set up properly and brings the magnetic forces to bear on the attraction aspects of love. Opposites somehow attract each other.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the words of encouragement and all the stars.
Joan
Comment from nbonner
I like the title of the poem. Love the descriptive words used in this love poem. Most soulmates are two different souls. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. NB
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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I like the title of the poem. Love the descriptive words used in this love poem. Most soulmates are two different souls. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. NB
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the good luck wishes.
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Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem leaves a lot up to the reader's imagination, as all good poetry should do. I enjoyed the flow of your well-crafted words. Well written, well done. Don
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Your poem leaves a lot up to the reader's imagination, as all good poetry should do. I enjoyed the flow of your well-crafted words. Well written, well done. Don
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the words of encouragement, Don.
Joan
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Poem meets the requirements of this contest in that it is written in 5-7-7, and is addressed to a lover.
It is different in using scientific terms such as "covalent," and "magnetic," which adds unique flavoring to the poem.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Poem meets the requirements of this contest in that it is written in 5-7-7, and is addressed to a lover.
It is different in using scientific terms such as "covalent," and "magnetic," which adds unique flavoring to the poem.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the review and editing helfp. I made the chnage
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New review posted.
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Thanks for reviewing after the change.
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Comment from DR DIP
I like this analogy the opposites poles attract just like in love and once they combine there is a wonderful bond. There is that magnetism you talk about Thanks for sharing
dip
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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I like this analogy the opposites poles attract just like in love and once they combine there is a wonderful bond. There is that magnetism you talk about Thanks for sharing
dip
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging words, dip.
Joan
Comment from Sallyo
Neat little piece, lifted by the use of an utterly unfamiliar word (I looked it up...) It makes perfect sense when brought in with magnets. It's difficult to get a very short poem to make an impact, but you succeeded.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Neat little piece, lifted by the use of an utterly unfamiliar word (I looked it up...) It makes perfect sense when brought in with magnets. It's difficult to get a very short poem to make an impact, but you succeeded.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Glad you liked it and learned a new word,.
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