Forever Obsession
Sometimes a love cannot be forgotten7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This jealousy poem, Forever Obsession, taps into the adhesive properties of relationships. Even when the split is marked with all kinds of signs of 'no return', the mind can write a personal narrative that brings a philanderer back, no questions, no reprisals, and no hard feelings.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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This jealousy poem, Forever Obsession, taps into the adhesive properties of relationships. Even when the split is marked with all kinds of signs of 'no return', the mind can write a personal narrative that brings a philanderer back, no questions, no reprisals, and no hard feelings.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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There is always hope, I guess. Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from emptypage
I love the points made, and the rhyming, especially in the last four lines, is very rhythmic and and had me reading multiple times.
Good luck in the contest. I think you nailed it.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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I love the points made, and the rhyming, especially in the last four lines, is very rhythmic and and had me reading multiple times.
Good luck in the contest. I think you nailed it.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the close read and the encouraging review.
Comment from Laine Carson
Great poem, sad reality for too many. I wish we could all learn that if a person causes such pain; they are not worth our time, trouble, heartache, or obsession.
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Great poem, sad reality for too many. I wish we could all learn that if a person causes such pain; they are not worth our time, trouble, heartache, or obsession.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is an excellent portrayal of jealousy. Many readers will be able to relate to the content. This poem shows the fickle state of love. This is an excellent piece of work. Good luck in the contest. I would not change a thing. The image is perfect. My vote is yours!
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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This is an excellent portrayal of jealousy. Many readers will be able to relate to the content. This poem shows the fickle state of love. This is an excellent piece of work. Good luck in the contest. I would not change a thing. The image is perfect. My vote is yours!
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your close read and your comments.
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My pleasure. Thanks for sharing.
brigitte
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how difficult it is to forget love and how tough it is to keep aside the impact of obsession, she hates her lover left her but she still cannot completely wipe out him; I liked.
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This speaks how difficult it is to forget love and how tough it is to keep aside the impact of obsession, she hates her lover left her but she still cannot completely wipe out him; I liked.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your comments.
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem does what all good poetry should do and that ignites the imagination of the reader. Well done and the Image complements your work. A joy to read and contemplate. Well done, sometimes the grass isn't' always greener.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Your poem does what all good poetry should do and that ignites the imagination of the reader. Well done and the Image complements your work. A joy to read and contemplate. Well done, sometimes the grass isn't' always greener.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your read and your encouraging review.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Wow. This chick has it bad. *smile* This poem is a great example of how sin creeps into your life and one small problem/issue can become larger and larger and finally, takes over your whole life:
She started out with a love - which turned turned into something evil when he left her.
How did she react?
She called him names/
Decided she HATES him
She enters into a depression.
She wants to kill him (or her?)
What an ugly progression!
Your poem makes a great point about this stuff. Be careful unless you want to follow this plot line! *smile*
Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Wow. This chick has it bad. *smile* This poem is a great example of how sin creeps into your life and one small problem/issue can become larger and larger and finally, takes over your whole life:
She started out with a love - which turned turned into something evil when he left her.
How did she react?
She called him names/
Decided she HATES him
She enters into a depression.
She wants to kill him (or her?)
What an ugly progression!
Your poem makes a great point about this stuff. Be careful unless you want to follow this plot line! *smile*
Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your review. Much appreciated. Jealousy is an evil thing and can lead to evil doings.
