Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a great poem. It sums up why people get lost in lust, all of us. I like the way you give so many definitions for lust and one simple powerful word for love. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thanks oliver, for this generous and uplifting review, it is much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

How love and lust differs is the question, this is a very nice poem done, many dimensions of love and lust portrayed, appealing and interesting to read. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks again Alcreator,for another wonderful review and stars which are greatly appreciated! I have pulled up a few oldies from my portfolio in preparation for release of a book and it's great to get your perspectives. Many thanks! Vance

Comment from mermaids

Exceptional

This poem needs to be posted on walls everywhere so people can read it. It is full of wisdom and shows the many differences between love and lust which many people do not understand.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks again mermaids, for swimming in the pool of my works here and giving me your wonderful perspectives and lovely stars! Wonderful to hear from you and hope to see you often! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I like this listing of comparisons and how you used the pink background to enhance the narrative. I would suggest that you include a photo, or some other kind of artwork to help with mental images of the reader. Regards.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks Sugarray, for your very kind and helpful review. I just reposted this work from my portfolio and failed to really promote it correctly. I appreciate your review very much and hope to see you again often! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well written and a good reference for the difference between love and lust.
You can add like to the mix and you have a talk for your people. They mistake lust for love, then when they want to marry they mistake love for like. All too often the lust and love wear off and they find they don't like each other.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Sharon, for your lovely review and stars and clearly, you very well understand the subject very very well and I appreciate your comments very much. Don't be a stranger please! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance