Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

Smiling people made me happy.
(this makes me happy also)

This was very funny. It kept me waiting to hear why people were laughing, of course I thought it was non fiction
hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017

Hi, Heidi;
can you imagine IF it were non-fiction? I think I would have been too ashamed to write about it!

Thank you for reading,

~patty~

Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

Now that was funny in anybody's books hehe! I could picture some one doing this in real life. Things like this happens to those who have their mind elsewhere's

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Hi, there;
thank you so much for reading and reviewing my bit of humor. I'm glad you found it funny and entertaining. I had a good time writing it.

~patty~

reply by country ranch writer on 09-Oct-2017

Pants are needed he he to go shopping or just plain ole clothes that cover the Netherlands below the waist. Hehe

Comment from Natali Holden

Excellent

You got me wondering, why is everyone staring? After I read this, "As the lady closest to me pointed with a snicker, I looked down. I wasn't wearing any pants." I assumed it was a dream. If it wasn't, poor you. That would've been embarrassing. Enjoyed!
Natali ;)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Hi, Natali;
thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little bit of humor.

~patty~

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I've actually had similar dreams. I find myself somewhere in public either stark naked or in a nightie. It's a relief to wake up. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Hi, Cindy;
thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I used to hate it when I dreamt like this in high school. Now, it's just too funny.

~patty~

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning, Patty

Good flow and pace. So now I know what you were getting those looks. I've had many a dream but nothing quite you had. Had I they would have run away screaming.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Hi, Ray;

Pretty sure this dream was a 'nightmare,' but I thought its retelling would make for a great story. Thank you for reading and reviewing,

~patty~

Comment from Karen Payne

Excellent

OMG. My worst nightmare! You are very clever. The story was so matter-of-fact and chatty that when I reached the end I actually did laugh out loud. Clever to drop the radio conversation in there and mention Donald Trump. It set me on a completely different tangent, so that the last line was really unexpected and just a treat to read. Loved it.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Hi, Karen;

Pretty sure this dream was a 'nightmare,' but I thought its retelling would make for a great story. Thank you for reading and reviewing,

~patty~

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I have had dreams like this.Your story does what all good writing should do and that ignites the imagination of the reader. Well done and the Image complements your work. A joy to read and contemplate. Well done Don and Vicki.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Hi there;

Pretty sure this dream was a 'nightmare,' but I thought its retelling would make for a great story. Thank you for reading and reviewing,

~patty~

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I think all of us have had a very similar dream at one time or another. I know I have. LOL Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi, Barbara;
Sometimes those dreams can be so much fun, right? I know when I was in high school, I was so paranoid about life in general, I had this dream about once a week. As an adult, it became high-stress situations, like work, church, and the grocery store. I just had to write about it,

~patty~

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I hate it when that happens! I love this well written little dream or was it really a dream? My luck I'd wake up at Wal-Mart in my tighies-whities. That would cause a scene.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi, Mike;
I can only imagine what would happen to you, or anyone, who really did this. Thank you for reading and reviewing,

~patty~

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Very nice story. I was wondering why everybody kept on smiling at her. Maybe it would have been even better if it hadn't been a dream.
Superbly written as usual.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi Gypsy;

thank you for reading and reviewing 'My New Clothes.' I had so much fun writing this story. I know it's a twist on an old story, but I loved the surprise.

~patty~

reply by Heather Knight on 07-Oct-2017

Hi Patty,
I'm not Gypsy. I'm Maria. Same country of origin... ;)

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi Maria;
sorry about that, I had just replied to Gypsy before you - and got on a roll. LOL

~patty~

reply by Heather Knight on 07-Oct-2017

No problem. The other day somebody called me Jill here on FS. Have a lovely day.