Mooning
A little lunacy41 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I do not know how I missed this post, but I am glad the Moon Photo captured my attention today. I enjoyed your lighthearted description, rhymes and alliteration in this shaped poem. Happy holidays and a peaceful 2018- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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I do not know how I missed this post, but I am glad the Moon Photo captured my attention today. I enjoyed your lighthearted description, rhymes and alliteration in this shaped poem. Happy holidays and a peaceful 2018- Joan
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Very many thanks for taking the time to review this, Joan. Very best wishes for 2018 to you, too! Tony
Comment from closetpoetjester
Hahaha you are SOOOOOOOOO funny Tony! This is a delightful bit of one-upmanship with the lunartic orbicular keeping the Sun's ego safely on terrafirma.
Hey be careful, there COULD be a reBUTTal haha. I have also heard that solar flares kick some serious arse LOL
Love your sense of humour. Sorry I missed this one when you posted it. A thorough delight to read you...as always.
Hugs P
PS Cutesy title too
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Hahaha you are SOOOOOOOOO funny Tony! This is a delightful bit of one-upmanship with the lunartic orbicular keeping the Sun's ego safely on terrafirma.
Hey be careful, there COULD be a reBUTTal haha. I have also heard that solar flares kick some serious arse LOL
Love your sense of humour. Sorry I missed this one when you posted it. A thorough delight to read you...as always.
Hugs P
PS Cutesy title too
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Good to hear from you, P. Thanks for the six stars, too. I haven't been posting for a while. Life's a bit crowded at the moment. I think I may have run over my muse with the four-wheel bike and slasher. Maybe that explains all the blowies!
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LMAO
Oh, on the contrary Tony...I think you just brought him back to life with all that subject matter haha
Either that or you HAVE completely torn him a new one hahaha
PLEASE write something soon. FS needs you LOL
No hang on. I need you LOL
You are TOO superb a poet NOT to be posting something. Even your shit stuff is good haha
X
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Tony. I think your muse bottomed out for sure. Still, it's a clever read and illustrated nicely. It's humorous and it's nice to have a giggle now and then. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hi Tony. I think your muse bottomed out for sure. Still, it's a clever read and illustrated nicely. It's humorous and it's nice to have a giggle now and then. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Yes, I do seem to have bottomed out with this one! LOL
I've been fairly busy recently and without much time to devote to FanStory, but hope to be back into the routine again before too much longer.
I hope you're keeping well.
Best wishes,
Tony
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Hi Tony. Your MoJo will come back as mine did. I recently had a foot op and recuperating for two months, so I was on and off FS, too.
Actually, I liked your Mooning poem. It was a different type of poem for you, but fun. I think your granddaughter is turning you into a kid again AND I didn't need a dictionary to look up your words. (Just kidding!) Marilyn
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and big grins tfawcus
I will say I had so much fun reading off how the moon gets sunned with your humorous words.
I'm wondering if the moon's needs some sun tan lotion put on his bun?
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Hello and big grins tfawcus
I will say I had so much fun reading off how the moon gets sunned with your humorous words.
I'm wondering if the moon's needs some sun tan lotion put on his bun?
Gert
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Very many thanks for your review of "Mooning", Gert. Glad you enjoyed it! All the best, Tony
Comment from Aussie
You cheeky bugger, you! I liked the illustration, looked like a row of Maltesers (sweets) jeepers, creepers where did you get those peepers? It's good to have some fun writing sometimes. Brooke tried to teach me all the forms of poetry - I stuck to rhyming quatrains, telling stories about Oz. Well done Hon.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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You cheeky bugger, you! I liked the illustration, looked like a row of Maltesers (sweets) jeepers, creepers where did you get those peepers? It's good to have some fun writing sometimes. Brooke tried to teach me all the forms of poetry - I stuck to rhyming quatrains, telling stories about Oz. Well done Hon.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for dropping by to review this, Kay. Glad you were amused by it! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from IndianaIrish
You may think you bottomed out with this poem, Tony, but it just shows your broad range of talent and diversity. You made me laugh...from the title to the last line! A fun and entertain8ng poem that sure doesn't need a language warning!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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You may think you bottomed out with this poem, Tony, but it just shows your broad range of talent and diversity. You made me laugh...from the title to the last line! A fun and entertain8ng poem that sure doesn't need a language warning!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thanks very much for your kind words, Karyn! Glad you enjoyed it! Tony
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You have really taken that old one liner and run right round the moon with it in this one Tony. Yes, it made me smile, as did your author's notes. Like gold text and the banana moon shape, well done all round.
cheers.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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You have really taken that old one liner and run right round the moon with it in this one Tony. Yes, it made me smile, as did your author's notes. Like gold text and the banana moon shape, well done all round.
cheers.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Valda. Just a bit of fun in an idle moment! Tony
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning Fawcus:
This poem shows your sense of humor and I like it that you used it for this poem. I also like it that you changed the last word, even though we all know what you wanted to write. I recently had to change one of the words in my last sentence of my newest post. I just couldn't make myself use the other word. I really like this poem, wonderful and I love the colors that you chose for your lay out.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Good morning Fawcus:
This poem shows your sense of humor and I like it that you used it for this poem. I also like it that you changed the last word, even though we all know what you wanted to write. I recently had to change one of the words in my last sentence of my newest post. I just couldn't make myself use the other word. I really like this poem, wonderful and I love the colors that you chose for your lay out.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Tier. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from honeytree
The art work is great
in everyway for this poem
I loved the words written
this way seems to be many
moons in the picture.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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The art work is great
in everyway for this poem
I loved the words written
this way seems to be many
moons in the picture.
Honey tree
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Annie. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
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that's fine tony.
honeytree
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great.
Annie.
Comment from His Grayness
Oh! Dear, do I wish I had ten stars for this absolutely "OUT OF THE GALAXY" 'Ripper" of a laugh. This is pure comedic genius that deserves a special display at the Smithsonian and....The White House too! Thanks so much for a Blast! Vance
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Oh! Dear, do I wish I had ten stars for this absolutely "OUT OF THE GALAXY" 'Ripper" of a laugh. This is pure comedic genius that deserves a special display at the Smithsonian and....The White House too! Thanks so much for a Blast! Vance
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Vance. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
