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Las Vegas massacre

A short story about the recent massacre

21 total reviews 
Comment from rheabug
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You have stated much of what we here in the United States are feeling at this time. There have been so many natural disasters and now one that is so shocking. A man takes a time which was meant for enjoyment and created a nightmare. Natural disasters are just that but what this man did was something beyond natural. HUGS

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday. Thanks for the great six.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Ine. I'll tell you my friend, it makes me sick to my stomach this man's picture everywhere on TV and newspapers! He should not get any press for his unbelievable acts of cruelty and having hurt so many innocent people. Your story is factual but, I so hate this kind of thing and don't believe this man should be given anything. Hope you and Robert are well! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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wow very well written and you laid out some very intriguing questions that will be hard to answer. It keeps going on and there is no reason why

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I understand that your parents play a role in how you grow up and all that but ultimately you have the choice of what to do. Do I shoot up a concert and kill a bunch of people, while wounding hundreds more, or do I sit at home and watch a comedy instead. His parents didn't make him shoot those people. I always hate that, because growing up in a crappy environment gives you a pass. Please! I don't think we'll ever know why.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from sunnilicious
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You have the skills to be a news reporter. Good research gathered. Well thought out and clearly written. I'm not pro-nuclear weapons. I'm unsure what type of shooting this was and to be done by one man. Worst than cuckoo.

Nice work.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from MizKat
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I don't usually don't write this kind of thing.
I always see it on TV which is enough for me.
It's nice that you wrote to those who don't have a TV.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
reply by MizKat on 08-Oct-2017
    Hi Ine,

    You are very welcome. I always like to read what you write.

    Kat
Comment from Bill Schott
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It is an horrific occurrence, Ine, and I think it may be just the beginning. Now that the martyrs know that so many can be killed with so little security, it won't take long for it to be commonplace.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written story about the horrific happenings on October 1st in Las Vegas. In my eyes it was just pure evil. It was such a senseless act to do. He killed and injured so many. Very good wording and pictures. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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This sad and truthful review of the recent tragic events has been very well written and collated, I absolutely loathe Trump and I am an Englishwoman, the right to bear arms needs to be changed in the amendment, it is a disgusting world we live in when mentally ill or deranged people can purchase guns freely, how many more must die before people wake up to this? Kind regards and well written, Meia xx

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from royowen
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Some demented man in Australia went mental in Australia killing 31 people in a single tragic event here in Australia in 1996, henceforth gun control was legislated, and it hasn't happened since, what are they thinking? Well done, Ine, blessings, Roy
Typo He visited the casino(')s in Vegas...

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
reply by royowen on 08-Oct-2017
    Most welcome