Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The desire to turn back the clock has been frequently expressed in literature and song over the ages. Unfortunately the ability to so do seems locked in the realms of science fiction regardless of the reasons behind an individual's desire. Einstein seemed to think it might be possible at one time but I personally doubt it. the present is dependent on the past and any manipulation of the latter would inevitably result in chaos in the here and now.

It remains a good idea for those who have made a pig's ear of our past relationships though, and we can dream. This particular dream sticks to the 5-7-7 format of the classic katauta.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi, Jim;
Thank you for reading my Katauta and tribute to lost loves. I think sometimes I would love to have a time machine, but then I realize it would totally change who I am,

~patty~

Comment from nbonner

Excellent

Memories can be a wondrous thing but then they can be hurtful too. If you want that person or thing back so bad that you pray for time to go back but it never does can be damaging to one's soul. Thanks for sharing, NB

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi,
Thank you so much for reading my Katauta about lost loves. I used to wish for a time machine, but then I realized I wouldn't be me,

~patty~

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Every day I wish-deeply that I could turn back time. With hindsight I could have lived the most fabulous life. But we are who we are and our mistakes make us. This is a great little poem and very well written kind regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi Meia;
thank you so much for reading this little poem. It came to me after watching a sad movie, 'Evening,' (a personal fave,) and I just had to write about it,

~patty~

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

You use a red background to surround the words with the color of love in this poem of lost love. It could be of a break up or of mourning the dead.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for reading this little poem of lost love. The pain felt within the words can belong to anyone who mourns, but for me, it was the memory of a love from 'yesterday,'

~patty~

reply by dragonpoet on 07-Oct-2017

Don't mention it.

Joan

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Patty

= This is a great entry for the prompt.
= Love, love Cher's 'If I Could Turn Back Time'. One of her best songs.
= Cool artwork with this entry as well.
= Hope you do well in the contest. Good Luck.

Cheers, J (*<*)

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for reading this little poem of lost love. The pain felt within the words can belong to anyone who mourns, but for me, it was the memory of a love from 'yesterday,'

~patty~

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your katauta "Oh! the longing". You followed all the rules for this genre and I liked your choice of picture.
All the best in the contest
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for reading this little poem of lost love. The pain felt within the words can belong to anyone who mourns, but for me, it was the memory of a love from 'yesterday,'

~patty~

reply by marybell1 on 07-Oct-2017

Thank you for sharing.
All the best.
Marybell1.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Exceptional

"Oh, the Longing", is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing you next post. To me, this is a definite six!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for reading this little poem of lost love. The pain felt within the words can belong to anyone who mourns, but for me, it was the memory of a love from 'yesterday,'

~patty~
ps; thank you for the EXCEPTIONAL rating

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 07-Oct-2017

Hi there ~patty~, you certainly deserved the exceptional rating.

Best wishes and bless you, the Duchess

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a nicely composed poem of remembrance of past love. Illustrated and worded well. Romantic and longing. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for reading this little poem of lost love. The pain felt within the words can belong to anyone who mourns, but for me, it was the memory of a love from 'yesterday,'

~patty~

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, a beautifully written entry - well constructed in form and smooth lyrical delivery. I appreciate Cher's song - she is one of my favorites, so I especially enjoyed the plaintive read and full presentation - thank you. It is perfect in its compliance with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...Eve

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for the lovely review. I was inspired by a wistful, sappy movie. I think its one of the best short poems I've written.

~patty~

reply by evesayshi on 06-Oct-2017

I can't agree, Patty, because I am finding all your poems I read to be the best you've ever written, short, long, or in between...Eve

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017

*blush* Thank you very much

reply by evesayshi on 06-Oct-2017

You are indeed welcome...

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written there are so many of us who wish we could turn back time to eliminate the pain sometimes ,or just to be given another chance well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017

Hi Jill;

thank you so much for the read and review. I think turning back time is something many wish for,

~patty~