Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

hello again Ine. I think there are a few errors in this one if it was meant to be factual, however your premise is still a good one. This horrible man should never be given the kind of press he is being given. Good write my friend. Take care. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I'm a gun owner. It's not the responsible gun owners who do these kinds of things. Making guns illegal won't solve anything. We made drugs illegal and that's still a huge issue. By making guns illegal you're only hurting the responsible gun owners. The bad guys will always find a way to get what they want, legal or illegal. My heart breaks for all the families. There are no words.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

We can ask ourselves why... And the police/fbi may actually find the answer. Cuckoo nut bag was an executive man. He planned and plotted. Also, cuckoo had cameras installed around the serial execution to capture the event properly on tape. They found it this morning or a few hours ago. So facts are still accumulating. So many victims. It's truly sad. Let us pray this never happens again.

Good work

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is truly a sad and heartbreaking tragedy that has happened. So unnecessary. You used very good wording and imagery with the pictures. I found one thing that you might need to correct:
. Or had he planning these murders earlier?
Or had he (been) planning these murders earlier?

Very well said! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

How terrible that something like this happened.
I don't understand how or why someone could do this.
It would be wonderful if there were no guns around.

Kat

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

reply by MizKat on 03-Oct-2017

I've had a hard time to feel great.
I guess that's what old age will do.
Now I'm always having aches and pains.
Kat

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a terrible tragedy here in the states. Yes, we have way too many guns here and it is too easy to get automatic weapons (no one needs automatic weapons like this to hunt).

Good article writing.

teresa

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Apparently gun sales go up when these things happen. How on earth can a country allow, weapons to be sold that are only used in wars? One can't use them even for hunting...He had 42 of them. But well done with this prose work. I fear for America. We have had strict rules here ever since 1996 when some fool went on a killing spree, killing 36 people. We don't have any incidents of this nature now. But well done, blessings, Roy
Typo or had he (been) planning

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

reply by royowen on 03-Oct-2017

You too Ine

Comment from emptypage

Average

You wrote, "Neither his family nor his female friend." What about them? This is not a complete sentence.

You wrote, "Or had he (BEEN) planning these murders earlier?

You wrote, "Robert (who is Robert??) just read in one paper, (<<< no COMMA) that he might have modified the weapons as they are illegal in the States.

This piece needs some work. Good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Average

Hi there;
I think we all are in shock about what happened, and it is good to write about it and get the grief out of your system. I've given your work a '3 star' rating because it needs a bit more work.

There are misspellings throughout, and many of your sentences are incomplete. Did you simply write and not edit?

A few nits; 'This happened at the 1rst(it is usually 1st or first in formal writing) October this year.'

'The number of deaths added (came up to? or added up to?)to fifty nine,'

'Neither his family nor his female friend.' (This is not a complete sentence.)

'Or had he planning these murders earlier?' (Another incomplete sentence - been?)

(and many more)

~patty~

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.