Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi Teresa;
a very clever use of your syllables within the lines of your katauta. The innuendo isn't lost on me, either. Well done and good luck in the contest!

~patty~

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

Thanks Patty:)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi tab,

Again you have written a very interesting poem.
I always look forward to reading all of your work.
You are great at writing wonderful things.
I've continued to read all things you write.

Kat

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

Thanks Kat:)

reply by MizKat on 03-Oct-2017

You're very welcome. Kat