Moistened
Katauta22 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Teresa
This was such a wonderful Katauta poem, written with an erotic feel and fantastic imagery.
Moistened like fresh mornings dew...is such a wonderful line.
Excellent
Mitchell
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Hi Teresa
This was such a wonderful Katauta poem, written with an erotic feel and fantastic imagery.
Moistened like fresh mornings dew...is such a wonderful line.
Excellent
Mitchell
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you Mitchell. By the way, I voted for your poem for poem of the month. It was fantastic!
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How kind, thank you Teresa
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written and a clever contest entry it can be looked at from the point of view of nature or an erotic point of you good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Yes my friend this is well written and a clever contest entry it can be looked at from the point of view of nature or an erotic point of you good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your most kind words and best wishes, Jill:)
Comment from RGstar
Beautifully erotic, but sensibly so. I doubt any could have written this better...including myself. Such beautiful sentiments that convey the message.
This will be a hard competition to judge.
Wishing you the very best of luck. Worth to be up there battling for the win.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Beautifully erotic, but sensibly so. I doubt any could have written this better...including myself. Such beautiful sentiments that convey the message.
This will be a hard competition to judge.
Wishing you the very best of luck. Worth to be up there battling for the win.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you RG for the very kind words and the good luck wishes:)
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Teresa.
A lovely little piece, mate.
You've managed to paint the imagery very well. I reckon I could have said the same thing in about 400-500 words... but you know how verbose I am by now.
Does the form not allow an image? I guess I just like looking at pictures lol.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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G'day Teresa.
A lovely little piece, mate.
You've managed to paint the imagery very well. I reckon I could have said the same thing in about 400-500 words... but you know how verbose I am by now.
Does the form not allow an image? I guess I just like looking at pictures lol.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I don't like using pictures but yes I could have. Thanks so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A naughty write here and I love it! I wish you luck with the contest as this is a winner for me and I wish I had a six for you as this deserves one, great words to ignite the imagination, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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A naughty write here and I love it! I wish you luck with the contest as this is a winner for me and I wish I had a six for you as this deserves one, great words to ignite the imagination, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the virtual six:)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Teresa, WOW! Now this is pure eroticism, very well done. Double meaning that can be taken however you choose, but I have no doubt how it is intended. A perfect Katauta that follows the rules - you have carried out the requirements. Bravo and good luck - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Hi Teresa, WOW! Now this is pure eroticism, very well done. Double meaning that can be taken however you choose, but I have no doubt how it is intended. A perfect Katauta that follows the rules - you have carried out the requirements. Bravo and good luck - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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I am glad you found it to be well done eroticism as I had hoped. Thanks so much for the review and good luck wishes.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how the plenty of hills and valleys appear in the morning, greatly and abundantly moistened like fresh morning's dew and seems poet's lover peaks; I liked.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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This speaks how the plenty of hills and valleys appear in the morning, greatly and abundantly moistened like fresh morning's dew and seems poet's lover peaks; I liked.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much:)
Comment from BeasPeas
I consider this to be erotica. It has a double meaning which the reader can easily interpret. Nicely composed without being graphic. My only suggestion would be to use softer colors for a more romantic presentation. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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I consider this to be erotica. It has a double meaning which the reader can easily interpret. Nicely composed without being graphic. My only suggestion would be to use softer colors for a more romantic presentation. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Thank you marilyn. I'm glad you found it erotic without being graphic, just as intended. Good suggestion about the color!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Graphic and yet passionate at the same time. I love the description as it brings the meaning of love and ecstasy to light in the reader's minds. I love it
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Graphic and yet passionate at the same time. I love the description as it brings the meaning of love and ecstasy to light in the reader's minds. I love it
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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I'm glad you love it, Barb, thanks. It is only graphic if you think of it in lover's terms not natures;) (wink) lol
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You know me...I love love
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I was thinking you had a dirty mind :) lol
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Oh yes never said I didn't.lol You should see some of the stories I have written for another site, you would cringe and a lot of peopleon here would hang their heads.lol
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I would LOVE to see them. I have one story I am working on that is very 'naughty' Would you email me one of them? But only if you feel comfortable doing so. No pressure.
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They are chapters but I will send a sample and please don't read if you don't want.
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I look forward to it:)
Comment from Rasmine
Now, this is romantic writing. There was a contest on here that was smut writing. Yeah, I guess you have to say it's art -- it's tasteless art, in my opinion, but art.
This can be erotic -- I think erotic writing, especially poetry, suggests but doesn't make it obvious. Do you know the contest I'm talking about? I should have just not looked. :P
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Now, this is romantic writing. There was a contest on here that was smut writing. Yeah, I guess you have to say it's art -- it's tasteless art, in my opinion, but art.
This can be erotic -- I think erotic writing, especially poetry, suggests but doesn't make it obvious. Do you know the contest I'm talking about? I should have just not looked. :P
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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I read those smut entries. Most were gross and too graphic. Yes, poetry can be erotic without being nasty. I'm glad you think mine is tastefully erotic. Thank you for the awesome gift of all the stars!!
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Oh, my god, and the illustrations were totally smutty and nasty ! p:
