Comment from For better for verse

Excellent

Not the most perfect poem I've read but certainly one of the bloody funniest.
True, a bit crude in places, but it all came together very well, to make a very entertaining read.
I'm sure there are weddings like this, and they probably live happily ever after.
Good effort.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017

So glad you enjoyed it. Many thanks.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

This is a strange and entertaining poem, though I'm not quite sure how it fits into the category for the 'family' contest. It's more of a wedding poem, isn't it? Maybe it's just me... Good luck to you!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Thanks for your comments.

Comment from Lucian Carter

Excellent

Meshing family (contest theme) and marriage, specifically the ceremony, is a potent combination. You brought wit and whimsy to the contest and you should be a contender.

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and commenting.