Soulmate
She meets every loving expectation7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Harry. Congratulations on winning the acrostic contest with this fine entry which is straightforward and honest. Nicely composed and a compliment to your relationship. Marilyn
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
Hi Harry. Congratulations on winning the acrostic contest with this fine entry which is straightforward and honest. Nicely composed and a compliment to your relationship. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much. It is truly and honor.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Six stars for you dear poet plus you have my thumbs up. Congrats on contest. Let me know who you are after contest. Your poem rhymes so musical and how great you speak of love and vivid descriptions of woman. liberty justice
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
Six stars for you dear poet plus you have my thumbs up. Congrats on contest. Let me know who you are after contest. Your poem rhymes so musical and how great you speak of love and vivid descriptions of woman. liberty justice
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the read and the kind words. I am Harry T. I live in Arlington Heights, Illinois. I am a retired school superintendent.
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WOW you're a genius. You WON didn't
you BIG TIME. Men write just
as well as women. Your poem
is so lovely charming filled
with deep devotion.
Do me favor help me
sell my two books. You can buy
my books and give away
as gifts or resell to stores.
Go to
my Profile and send two
links my books are selling
at all over Arlington and
the world. thanks liberty
justice
Comment from Lucian Carter
Excellent language. It's flowery without being dense. Loving, without being sappy and adequately praising the soulmate in question. I recently discovered my best friend was my soulmate and I've never been happier.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
Excellent language. It's flowery without being dense. Loving, without being sappy and adequately praising the soulmate in question. I recently discovered my best friend was my soulmate and I've never been happier.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the read and the kind words. Happy for your discovery.
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is beautifully written and seems to come straight from the heart. You chose a perfect picture to accompany your poem! Good luck in the contest.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
This is beautifully written and seems to come straight from the heart. You chose a perfect picture to accompany your poem! Good luck in the contest.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your read and your kind words.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful tribute to the one you love and I love your expressive language and warm sentiments, a perfectly executed Acrostic, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
This is a wonderful tribute to the one you love and I love your expressive language and warm sentiments, a perfectly executed Acrostic, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Dolly, for your read and your kind words of encouragement.
Comment from fastdigits
Beautifully structured Acrostic poem full of artistic poetic phrases that dance down the page in a fascinating pirouette of thoughts
Well done
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
Beautifully structured Acrostic poem full of artistic poetic phrases that dance down the page in a fascinating pirouette of thoughts
Well done
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the read and your wonderful ocmment.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Simple but the meaning seemed to touch every emotional reaction to being in love. I feel it implied some message behind the phrase, "Love at first sight." I liked that it wasn't drowned under a rhyme, but expressed some urgency of self.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
Simple but the meaning seemed to touch every emotional reaction to being in love. I feel it implied some message behind the phrase, "Love at first sight." I liked that it wasn't drowned under a rhyme, but expressed some urgency of self.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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You got that right and have been ever since. Thanks for the read and the comment.