I'm Listening
give me strength 5-7-561 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
Loved the art work
and the words for this poem
especially the last few words
"help me find the way."
Honey tree
I have no six left.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Loved the art work
and the words for this poem
especially the last few words
"help me find the way."
Honey tree
I have no six left.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi Annie, so good to see my sweet friend...thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...just the thought of your six is more than enough...thank you...Love Linda xxoo
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That's fine
Linda.
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smiling...xxoo love
Comment from Possummagic
The words that you have penned for your poem are good. I can't help feeling that having even more words in your imagery detracts from your own work. In my opinion the imagery should be just that. This just adds more words to a 5-7-5 poem. PM
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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The words that you have penned for your poem are good. I can't help feeling that having even more words in your imagery detracts from your own work. In my opinion the imagery should be just that. This just adds more words to a 5-7-5 poem. PM
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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HI PM, thank you so much for your great review...I saw this picture...and it seemed to say so much...I'm glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
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You're welcome. PM
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smiling...xxoo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Simple words are sometimes the most resonating and your poem speaks volumes and will appeal to many and five peace to their lives, wise and faithful words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Simple words are sometimes the most resonating and your poem speaks volumes and will appeal to many and five peace to their lives, wise and faithful words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi Dolly, thank you for a great review my sweet friend...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
It's great to see a post from you, Linda, and what a lovely, well-expressed poem it is!
Yes, the words you've used in composing this may be simple, that's true. But simply because a poems wording is simple makes it no less true or impactful.
I feel you've hit a home run outta the ball park with this one.
I haven't received a review from you in quite awhile. I hope I've done nothing to upset you.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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It's great to see a post from you, Linda, and what a lovely, well-expressed poem it is!
Yes, the words you've used in composing this may be simple, that's true. But simply because a poems wording is simple makes it no less true or impactful.
I feel you've hit a home run outta the ball park with this one.
I haven't received a review from you in quite awhile. I hope I've done nothing to upset you.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Hi Dean, omg no...I'm not upset at all with you...I spent about two months in Florida...first two weeks were with my mom and dad...they don't have the net...and the next was with my daughter in Irma...and no electric...I will get back to writing and reading as soon as I can...just so many things going on...nothing about you my sweet friend...I hope all is well with you...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
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Oh, that's good to hear, Linda.
You are more than welcome.
HUGS!!!
~Dean
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big hugs back at ya...xxoo love
Comment from tfawcus
I like the idea behind this one. The words are always there for those who care to stop and listen. Often we confuse ourselves with words, when the answers lie in those times of silence and contemplation - a truth well known to monastic orders.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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I like the idea behind this one. The words are always there for those who care to stop and listen. Often we confuse ourselves with words, when the answers lie in those times of silence and contemplation - a truth well known to monastic orders.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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HI Tony, so good to see you my friend...thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...hope you are doing well...thank you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A simple 5-7-5 that speaks volumns . Without Him, our way is lost and we walk unaided and alone to survive. Very well done
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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A simple 5-7-5 that speaks volumns . Without Him, our way is lost and we walk unaided and alone to survive. Very well done
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi Barb, thank you so very much my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Oatmeal
L.RAVEN,
Short, sweet and clean...just like I like them! Good chosen words. Telling things very plain and comprehensible. Created impressions through the descriptions are vivid, forceful and making the reader think about it.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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L.RAVEN,
Short, sweet and clean...just like I like them! Good chosen words. Telling things very plain and comprehensible. Created impressions through the descriptions are vivid, forceful and making the reader think about it.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi Camille, so good to see you...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from RoDanni
this is a good 5-7-5 poem. it reads like a very sincere prayer, not like you were trying to force something into a 5-7-5 format. I'm looking for God's grace every day, too, so i can really relate. i liked it.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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this is a good 5-7-5 poem. it reads like a very sincere prayer, not like you were trying to force something into a 5-7-5 format. I'm looking for God's grace every day, too, so i can really relate. i liked it.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi Roseanne, thank you so much for your great review....I am so glad you like it...I am also looking for Gods grace everyday...thank you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from AnnaLinda
Linda,
This is an amazing 5-7-5 poem with
a powerful message. You did not enter
it in the contest?
I love the words on the art and your
prayer/poem is so impacting.
Linda
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Linda,
This is an amazing 5-7-5 poem with
a powerful message. You did not enter
it in the contest?
I love the words on the art and your
prayer/poem is so impacting.
Linda
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi AnnaLinda, thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...and thank you for all your lovely stars...I am so glad you like it...thank you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I'm Listening", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading. To me this is a definite six!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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"I'm Listening", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading. To me this is a definite six!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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HI Duchess, WOW!!!...thank you so much sweet lady for a wonderful review...and all your wonderful stars...I am so glad you like it...I hope you are doing well my sweet friend...thank you...love Linda xxoo
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Linda, my possum, you definitely deserved the wonderful review.
Bless you and take care, the Duchess xox
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thank you beautiful lady...Bless you as well...and you take care too...love Linda xxoo
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Linda, my possum, as always you're very welcome.
Bless you and take care, the Duchess
