I'm Listening
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Comment from Lucian Carter
It's true, the words are simple. But faith is simple sometimes. Not easy, by any means, but simple.
The capitalization is odd to me. Obviously "Lord" should be capitalized. But grace and dear? If you are going in that direction, capitalize some other words too. Speak, Receive, help, find and way could all be capitalized. I think though, it would be better to remove every capital except Lord (and I), that might emphasize your point better,
I hope you find your way. I also hope when God speaks to you they don;t lock you in the looney bin :)
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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It's true, the words are simple. But faith is simple sometimes. Not easy, by any means, but simple.
The capitalization is odd to me. Obviously "Lord" should be capitalized. But grace and dear? If you are going in that direction, capitalize some other words too. Speak, Receive, help, find and way could all be capitalized. I think though, it would be better to remove every capital except Lord (and I), that might emphasize your point better,
I hope you find your way. I also hope when God speaks to you they don;t lock you in the looney bin :)
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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HI Lucian, thank you so much for your help...I hope I do too...and I'm sure they won't...smiling back at ya...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
