Nothing missed
about making bucket list19 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A well worded poem.
Very well done. Concise and makes a strong point.
The message is clear with this one and I completely agree with you.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
A well worded poem.
Very well done. Concise and makes a strong point.
The message is clear with this one and I completely agree with you.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging words, Sharon.
Joan
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Dragonpoet, I enjoyed reading this poem about making the most of life. It acts as a reminder to live life to the full. If I were to add any suggestion it would be in this line - "Time is taken". It lends itself to the idea that one is taking one's time about things. I would perhaps word it - "Time is spent". Food for thought. Thank you for sharing. ~DD
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
Dragonpoet, I enjoyed reading this poem about making the most of life. It acts as a reminder to live life to the full. If I were to add any suggestion it would be in this line - "Time is taken". It lends itself to the idea that one is taking one's time about things. I would perhaps word it - "Time is spent". Food for thought. Thank you for sharing. ~DD
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the kind words and high rating. I'll think about the change
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Comment from johnwilson
This is a beautiful piece. I especially liked" Something ends
A day
A life"
For me, the ending took something away from the rest of the piece. (the part after, So...)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
This is a beautiful piece. I especially liked" Something ends
A day
A life"
For me, the ending took something away from the rest of the piece. (the part after, So...)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Maybe the ending could So you make sure
You really
Live life
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Comment from lyenochka
Thanks a good exhortation. Life is so brief and the realization of its brevity causes people to make bucket lists of things to accomplish or experience before the "end." Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
Thanks a good exhortation. Life is so brief and the realization of its brevity causes people to make bucket lists of things to accomplish or experience before the "end." Well done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked it.
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Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A clever and interesting way you have written the thought process that goes into making a bucket list.
Love the way you have formatted this, which falls beautifully into the realms of a list.
Excellent
Mitchell
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
A clever and interesting way you have written the thought process that goes into making a bucket list.
Love the way you have formatted this, which falls beautifully into the realms of a list.
Excellent
Mitchell
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the concise review. I appreciate all the stars and the comment on the format being like a list.
Joan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about making bucket list of actions to be taken, life goes on, you are instructed to do it all and not to miss anything as per the plan and in view of the list; I liked.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
This speaks about making bucket list of actions to be taken, life goes on, you are instructed to do it all and not to miss anything as per the plan and in view of the list; I liked.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading, the kind words and the high rating. All are much appreciated.
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Comment from GracieAnn
Drag,
This poem is so simple and to the point with a fervent yet quiet plea for people to scratch off everything on their Bucket List. Powerful message. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
Drag,
This poem is so simple and to the point with a fervent yet quiet plea for people to scratch off everything on their Bucket List. Powerful message. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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I am glad you found the poem so rousing. I appreciate all the stars.
dragon
Comment from Teri7
Joan, This is a very interesting poem about making a bucket list. You used very good wording. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
Joan, This is a very interesting poem about making a bucket list. You used very good wording. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much.
Joan
Comment from myrosebud
Terse and complete. A simple life lesson to savor every moment.
So many people put off their bucket list until it is too late. Should appeal to the
young. Already too late for us old guys.
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
Terse and complete. A simple life lesson to savor every moment.
So many people put off their bucket list until it is too late. Should appeal to the
young. Already too late for us old guys.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the review. What can I do to make in a 5 in your eyes.
It is never to late as long as you are living. I just started fulling my bucket list
by going on a bi-plane and glider ride in the last two months and I am
57 years old. President Bush skydived on his 90th birthday.
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Did not mean to give bad review, I liked it
I am new and no expert and thought 4 was good.
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i will have to bone up on what those numbers mean. Please forgive me
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You rate what ever you feel is right. I think some ideas on how to rate can be found on the site somewhere. You might want to email the site.
Welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Are our bucket lists thwarted by our short life? Mine seems to be endless and I doubt I shall have enough years to fulfill them all, but it's nice to dream, wise resonating and meaningful words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
Are our bucket lists thwarted by our short life? Mine seems to be endless and I doubt I shall have enough years to fulfill them all, but it's nice to dream, wise resonating and meaningful words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Maybe we should rate the importance of each
item on our bucket list and maybe weed out the ones that really out of our ability to fulfill.
Joan