Robots in Love
Seven words or less poem6 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
And one thinks about the heart, a lump of muscle, and the brain, a gooey mess of tangled cells, and whether love would not be sweeter in a nice clean IC chip.
Looks like an excellent response to a seven word prompt.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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And one thinks about the heart, a lump of muscle, and the brain, a gooey mess of tangled cells, and whether love would not be sweeter in a nice clean IC chip.
Looks like an excellent response to a seven word prompt.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Great review -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
Need to add a word, fast. There are only six here. Perhaps a BUT in the center would be a good idea. Can't win a seven word poem contest with only six words.Sorry, didn't see the OR LESS part.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Need to add a word, fast. There are only six here. Perhaps a BUT in the center would be a good idea. Can't win a seven word poem contest with only six words.Sorry, didn't see the OR LESS part.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thanks for reading - zanya
Comment from rama devi
Clever and witty! So true and well said. I imagine this will evoke many chuckles and a few votes. It's one of the most entertaining entries I've read thus far, and it is simultaneously insightful. Bravo. Sure to be a contender.
You might want to remove the unwanted space before the !
Fine presentation.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Clever and witty! So true and well said. I imagine this will evoke many chuckles and a few votes. It's one of the most entertaining entries I've read thus far, and it is simultaneously insightful. Bravo. Sure to be a contender.
You might want to remove the unwanted space before the !
Fine presentation.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Delighted with this review -thanks for reading zanya
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:-)))
Comment from Lucian Carter
You made it with a word to spare! Nice. Despite being all on one line, this feels like a poem, not a tweet.
The picture seems at odds with the message of the piece. But those sorts of things don't affect my reviews.
Perhaps one day robots will fall in love. I doubt I'll be around to see it; glad I was around to see this poem.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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You made it with a word to spare! Nice. Despite being all on one line, this feels like a poem, not a tweet.
The picture seems at odds with the message of the piece. But those sorts of things don't affect my reviews.
Perhaps one day robots will fall in love. I doubt I'll be around to see it; glad I was around to see this poem.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Brigitte Elko
It is concise and has impact, well done. The illustration is a perfect choice. In this tech world this is a perfect submission. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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It is concise and has impact, well done. The illustration is a perfect choice. In this tech world this is a perfect submission. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from His Grayness
Very clever indeed, robots have no hearts and the point is comical and clear, very well presented with real power of impact in humor. I cannot offer any suggestion to improve this fun work and thank the author for a big giggle. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Very clever indeed, robots have no hearts and the point is comical and clear, very well presented with real power of impact in humor. I cannot offer any suggestion to improve this fun work and thank the author for a big giggle. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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And thanks for a great review zanya
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The thanks all go out to you! HIS GRAYNESS
