haiku (golden poplars)
haiku contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
I learn so much from reading others haikus, yours is no exception. I find this to be quite beautiful, and I love the simplicity. Blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
  |
I learn so much from reading others haikus, yours is no exception. I find this to be quite beautiful, and I love the simplicity. Blessings...
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
-
Thank you
Comment from l.raven
HI Val, I love a good juicy pear...so much of the fruit you find today is like a baseball...we had one market place by my daughters house...the owners split it...and now it's awful...sigh...I love your poem sweet girl...and the colors of fall...very well written...and a beautiful picture...makes me hungry...LOL...love ya you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
|
HI Val, I love a good juicy pear...so much of the fruit you find today is like a baseball...we had one market place by my daughters house...the owners split it...and now it's awful...sigh...I love your poem sweet girl...and the colors of fall...very well written...and a beautiful picture...makes me hungry...LOL...love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
-
Thank you Linda, your comments are always special to me. Love Ya too
-
your so welcome you...xxoo love
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The last pears of the season are processed for drying and canned fruit every year. A time of hard work but will be satisfying when we see the finished products to enjoy.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
|
A very well-written haiku. The last pears of the season are processed for drying and canned fruit every year. A time of hard work but will be satisfying when we see the finished products to enjoy.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
-
Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from rama devi
Good work. Fine imagery, tone and style. Superb word economy. excellent kigo and mood. Excellent satori line. Excellent alliteration of P, assonance of I and consonance of L and S. Fine presentation too.
Nears a six, but I have none left, alas.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
|
Good work. Fine imagery, tone and style. Superb word economy. excellent kigo and mood. Excellent satori line. Excellent alliteration of P, assonance of I and consonance of L and S. Fine presentation too.
Nears a six, but I have none left, alas.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
-
Thank you for the excellent review. I am always thrilled to get them from you, as you actually review. LOL
-
Thanks, Val! ;-)))) I try! Warmly, rd
Comment from pome lover
good. words used sparingly, but full meaning there. good haiku.
The pears in the picture, look so good I'd like to pick one right out of the bowl. very nice.
pome lover
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
|
good. words used sparingly, but full meaning there. good haiku.
The pears in the picture, look so good I'd like to pick one right out of the bowl. very nice.
pome lover
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
-
Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice haiku you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
|
This is a very nice haiku you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
-
Thank you for the review.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Wonderful Haiku, I love canning, we have so many apple and pear orchards all over where I live, it's so wonderful. Happy canning:) ~Kerry
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
|
Wonderful Haiku, I love canning, we have so many apple and pear orchards all over where I live, it's so wonderful. Happy canning:) ~Kerry
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
-
Thank you for the review.
-
Your very welcome:)
Comment from fastdigits
With but twelve syllables you have taken us to that time of the year when pears are not eaten but rather put in cans for future use.
Well done, and good luck
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
|
With but twelve syllables you have taken us to that time of the year when pears are not eaten but rather put in cans for future use.
Well done, and good luck
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
-
Thanks for the lovely review
Comment from Cindy Warren
I bet those pears will be delicious. There's nothing like home canning. It's so much better than the stuff you buy at the store. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
|
I bet those pears will be delicious. There's nothing like home canning. It's so much better than the stuff you buy at the store. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
-
Thank you for the lovely review
