The Shadows Of The Past
No escape from the dark12 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Oh this is very good. I like this a lot. The rhythm and flow of the piece are spot on and the melancholic aspect of it shines through really well. the similar words and repetition in the first and last verses really tie it all together.
Best of luck to you.
GMG
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Hi there,
Oh this is very good. I like this a lot. The rhythm and flow of the piece are spot on and the melancholic aspect of it shines through really well. the similar words and repetition in the first and last verses really tie it all together.
Best of luck to you.
GMG
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind words and encouraging review. Much appreciated
Comment from Sanku
it is a change to read a poem without any art work. It is well written evenly flowing and tells the story of loneliness and lost love.
The last stanza implies a lot that the lady did something bad thathurt a lot of people.
All the best for the contest.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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it is a change to read a poem without any art work. It is well written evenly flowing and tells the story of loneliness and lost love.
The last stanza implies a lot that the lady did something bad thathurt a lot of people.
All the best for the contest.
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind words and great review. Much appreciated
