Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

This is a sweet piece that fits the form beautifully. I especially like the "sharing in the letter" line. The whole dream, stream, sharing feel flows along like - well, like a poem! Lovely picture, too. Not sure of the rose. Is it "Peace"?

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Thank you. The rose is a forget-me-not. It glides nice but the star-maker soars in the heavens.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

I love your poem. It 's simple, straight to the point and very meaningful. I like your subject and love your artwork choice. You use a great repeating line and good alliteration of c and a words.

angel123

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

Thank you. You know I write to bring a smile. I'll never be rich but with your kind words I feel blessed, for I gave you a smile. Thank you.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and well written Rondelet type poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and I love the picture of the rose you used for the art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thank you. I revised it a bit to meet the requirements. I hope you like it better.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I would have to agree with your words in your poem, a lot of my ideas for my poetry in my dream state. Well done, Don and Vicki.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017

Thank you. We all live and die in dreams. I hope you approve of my changes. it rings more right.