Tangled
Is there any way Out?6 total reviews
Comment from bsmath
The picture you chose is very colorful and interesting. It is easy to see what you are driving at in your poem. It is hard to say so much in just a few lines. I enjoyed the metaphor "mankind's path".
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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The picture you chose is very colorful and interesting. It is easy to see what you are driving at in your poem. It is hard to say so much in just a few lines. I enjoyed the metaphor "mankind's path".
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Very true. The picture and poem speaks to me of the "tangled web" of "lies" as well as of the internet which makes the world so much smaller now. Mankind is still just as lost as before the words of the web brought paths together.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Very true. The picture and poem speaks to me of the "tangled web" of "lies" as well as of the internet which makes the world so much smaller now. Mankind is still just as lost as before the words of the web brought paths together.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from oliver818
This is a great antonym poem, simple but profound. I like the image of the web of
Chaos, very evocative. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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This is a great antonym poem, simple but profound. I like the image of the web of
Chaos, very evocative. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Antonym poem. We are sometimes feel lost and confused in circumstances out of our control. Until we found the right way to go through.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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A very well-written Antonym poem. We are sometimes feel lost and confused in circumstances out of our control. Until we found the right way to go through.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This antonym poem, Tangled, has a good antonym pair and seems to reflect the current situation of lies and bringing the world to the brink in the absence of any credible leadership.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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This antonym poem, Tangled, has a good antonym pair and seems to reflect the current situation of lies and bringing the world to the brink in the absence of any credible leadership.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from RoDanni
Great image choice. Very culturally and politically relevant. This is a great antonym poem. I like how it reads as a sentence while still following the rules. Smart idea to center it. Good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Great image choice. Very culturally and politically relevant. This is a great antonym poem. I like how it reads as a sentence while still following the rules. Smart idea to center it. Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
