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Greedy guy wants it all4 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello, Boogienights: Congratulations on your 1rst prize win the Deadly Sins contest. Greed is something I think we all deal with from time to time. I always have to correct myself because I can tend to be very materialistic. I spend a lot of money on the things in life that I desire. In fact, I over spend, and dig myself further into dept. It's a vicious cycle.
I don't think it can be considered greed though because i don't want to be rich, just comfortably. Your poem is great, though. You did very well.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Hello, Boogienights: Congratulations on your 1rst prize win the Deadly Sins contest. Greed is something I think we all deal with from time to time. I always have to correct myself because I can tend to be very materialistic. I spend a lot of money on the things in life that I desire. In fact, I over spend, and dig myself further into dept. It's a vicious cycle.
I don't think it can be considered greed though because i don't want to be rich, just comfortably. Your poem is great, though. You did very well.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much. I was thrilled to win since there were many great entry's.I appreciate you taking time to read and review my poem.
Comment from smileycloud
such a good story in a poem
great flow cadence rhyme good free verse style
the content is fun to read made me laugh and is really good
good word imagery and the character is quite endearing
and the ending is great
good luck in the contest
like the scrabble picture too
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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such a good story in a poem
great flow cadence rhyme good free verse style
the content is fun to read made me laugh and is really good
good word imagery and the character is quite endearing
and the ending is great
good luck in the contest
like the scrabble picture too
have a smiley day
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for the nice review.
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Thank you so much for the nice review.
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Thank you so much for the nice review.
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Thank you so much for the nice review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned about greed about the deadly sin. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about greed about the deadly sin. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate the nice review.
Comment from sandy montgomery
Greed is a deadly sin for sure. Great rhythm to this piece. Your rhymes were quite natural and organic. Good solid structure and the contest requirements were met. Well done. A success.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Greed is a deadly sin for sure. Great rhythm to this piece. Your rhymes were quite natural and organic. Good solid structure and the contest requirements were met. Well done. A success.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you for such a nice review.
