Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This antonym poem, War Vibess, has a good antonym pair and fits into the current Sabre rattling that that has us waiting on North Korea to decide whether they want to continue to exist.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

Yes we seem to be embroiled in the echoes of war..thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is a very good contest submission. I like the play of peace against war. As course, as all of us do, I hope for peace. I don't know how this can happen, but it might.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

This little poem meets the antonym poetry style.
Short, but it made me stop, re-read the first two lines. A good thing. Not a confusion, but to feel the impact of what society living on the edge of war is feeling. In my head I hear 'peace vibes quiver'. Awesome. We want peace. It's a fragile thing. Will 'vibes' of hope, of desire, make any difference?

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017

Yes our world is shattered with war vibes-thanks for reading and critique zanya