Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Love autumn too! The colours, fragrances, and a few bears in the area filling their tummies before the long winter nap. You got it, girl! Lovely autumn images!
Drew xx

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Drew;
thank you so much for the lovely review of my fall poem. I enjoy the Nonet poetic form; its so fun to work with!

~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Beautiful poem Patty. You described the fall perfectly in such a few lines! The poetry style is very unique too, I might have to try it someday! How do you come across these types?

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Chloe;
there is a website called ShadowPoetry.com - it has a great deal of information about poetry and the different poetic forms. I think you would enjoy it.

thank you for reviewing my poem,

~patty~

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Patty, Fall is my favorite season of the year as well. Good luck in the contest with this beautifully written and presented. Many blessings for a wonder filled week, Patricia

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Patricia;
thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I love the news you enjoy the Fall, too. I hope you are doing well this afternoon,

~patty~

reply by patcelaw on 18-Sep-2017

I am doing a little better this afternoon. My air had gone on the fritz, and one of the men from my church came out and repaired it for me. Patricia

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

that's good. I'm glad you have nice people in your church who will come and help you.

~p~

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow this is a perfectly done nonet and the descriptions leading to the season of peace and to love is excellently done. Content is consistant

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Barb;
thank you so much for the lovely review of this poem. I had a good time putting together this piece as the cool breeze blew through my house this morning,

~patty~

Comment from For better for verse

Excellent

My favourite time of year by a mile.
Thought it was a great piece of creative writing, and really conveyed what I think is the magic of this time of year.
Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for the lovely review of this poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Nonet poem describing the transition of the seasons.from summer to Autumn. A relieve from the heat with cool breezes and to cuddle up with warm clothing and hot chocolate.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Sandra;
thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Hi, Patty.
You've created a lovely poem with this gorgeous image and a clever arrangement of cosy warmth in your words. Fires, autumn colours and burning passions. Time to fall in love--great title!
Nicole

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Nicole;
thank you for the lovely review. I had a great time putting this little poem together. I'm glad you liked it,

~patty~

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Sounds like fun. We don't have fall in Florida. The change is subtle. The temperature drops to the high eighties. We only have to mow the yard every other week. Other than that it's the same.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Thomas;

That doesn't sound like fun at all. I've never lived in FL - visited a few times, and I'll be in Ft. Lauderdale/Miami to catch a cruise in April of next year. It's way too humid for me!

Thanks for reading,

~patty~

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

I found this to be a beautifully presented work of lovely fall season colors. The writing is clean, clear, full of joyful delight, and everything about this work is certainly a six star delivery. My sincere apologies for not having all of them but my thanks for a great read overall. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Vance;
thank you so much for the lovely review of this little poem. I had a good time constructing this one,

~patty~

reply by His Grayness on 18-Sep-2017

My joy indeed and all thanks to you! Vance

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Patty,
This is a great poem & contest entry. Good job on the syllable counts per line. The picture is awesome.

I love Fall, too. We will have warm to hot temps in the afternoon through mid October with some cooling at night/early morning. Right now it is 85^ with more coming--99* Wed. I love the colors of leaves on the few trees we have. Your words create great imagery. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Jan;
thank you so much for the lovely review. This poem came to me as the cool breeze blew through my house this morning. (I opened this windows when it got stuff yesterday afternoon, and it was actually a tiny bit chilly!)

Oh, yay.

I know how hot it is where you are - up until last September, I was living in southwestern New Mexico.

~patty~