In a Huff
10-Word Poem Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ten word poem. The Kitty is very upset how could they forget to feed me. He is already thinner and hungry. He needs dinner very quickly now.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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A very well-written ten word poem. The Kitty is very upset how could they forget to feed me. He is already thinner and hungry. He needs dinner very quickly now.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, for your indignant reaction to the plight of the hungry kitten. You can relax. i'm sure he's been fed by now.
Your comments always are appreciated.
Comment from Thal1959
I generally avoid the briefer poetic forms, like Haiku and Senryu. But sometimes a brief expression can be artistic. Yours makes good and simple sense. (Even if one is not a cat lover!) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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I generally avoid the briefer poetic forms, like Haiku and Senryu. But sometimes a brief expression can be artistic. Yours makes good and simple sense. (Even if one is not a cat lover!) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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It's especially rewarding to know my little poem was appreciated by someone not a fancier of felines. Thank you, Thal.
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from rama devi
Cute approach to the contest with the cat's POV. Nice rhyming. A chuckle-worthy poem. Good flow. Fine presentation. Good luck! Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Cute approach to the contest with the cat's POV. Nice rhyming. A chuckle-worthy poem. Good flow. Fine presentation. Good luck! Warmly, rd
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thanks again, rd, my dear. I'm glad you enjoyed my cat humor. I do try to induce chuckles when possible. (LOL"s have no meaning anymore, if they ever were truthful.) It's always a treat to hear from you;
Don
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:-))) Thanks for your kind reply, Don. I kinda like LOL but it has grown old...true!
It can mean lots of love too. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-word poem, In A Huff, has exactly ten words in it and
provides a cute rhyme to go along with the reminding whine from the one who knows that, once again, no one remembered to feed the cat.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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This ten-word poem, In A Huff, has exactly ten words in it and
provides a cute rhyme to go along with the reminding whine from the one who knows that, once again, no one remembered to feed the cat.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thanks again, Bill! Your comments are right on.
Don
Comment from suep
I love it! Great entry. It's funny and it rhymes. So true. My cats demand frequent feedings so I could relate to this for sure. The picture is a perfect fit. Nice work. Best wishes in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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I love it! Great entry. It's funny and it rhymes. So true. My cats demand frequent feedings so I could relate to this for sure. The picture is a perfect fit. Nice work. Best wishes in the contest! :)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you your compliments and encouragement , Sue. I'm glad you liked my hungry kitten poem.
Comment from Irish Rain
I love it!! Love the cute little tabby kitten, love the words!! A wonderful entry for this 10 word contest, just precious!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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I love it!! Love the cute little tabby kitten, love the words!! A wonderful entry for this 10 word contest, just precious!! Blessings...
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Irish, for your delightful review! I'm glad you liked my hungry kitten poem.
Comment from ronnie k
LOL, I not a push over but dear poet you took me off my post for a moment, no very often will my screen give picture, so happy it did this time.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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LOL, I not a push over but dear poet you took me off my post for a moment, no very often will my screen give picture, so happy it did this time.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Than you, Ronnie. I'm glad your screen cooperated, and you were able to enjoy my hungry kitten poem.
Comment from pome lover
cute.
you made every word count.
and darling picture to go with it.
AND a clever way to rhyme - incorporating the kitten's meow.
good entry and good job.
pome lover
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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cute.
you made every word count.
and darling picture to go with it.
AND a clever way to rhyme - incorporating the kitten's meow.
good entry and good job.
pome lover
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much, pome lover. I'm glad you liked my hungry kitten poem.
Comment from tfawcus
If kittens could only speak! Your words describe the picture perfectly. I like the way you have used a rhyme pair to open and close your poem, which gives it a nice sense of completeness.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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If kittens could only speak! Your words describe the picture perfectly. I like the way you have used a rhyme pair to open and close your poem, which gives it a nice sense of completeness.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Tony. I'm glad you liked my hungry kitten poem. As always, your reviews are insightful and encouraging.
Comment from sunnilicious
That is an adorable artwork choice. I don't mind being thin, but growling tummies are never okay. Good lyrical flow. Good rhymes. Well thought out and clearly written. Great work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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That is an adorable artwork choice. I don't mind being thin, but growling tummies are never okay. Good lyrical flow. Good rhymes. Well thought out and clearly written. Great work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Alicia! The way you started your review sounded like it was written by a cat. It wasn't, was it? :-)
Don
