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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Hello my friend this is well written a good fun piece with very good word play and having in with names just to get there ultimate goal the food well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Mrs P
Comment from Joan E.
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I relished the names of the skunks and your wordplay. The picture of the quartet caught my attention, and your lighthearted descriptions were amusing. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Joan
Comment from BOO ghost
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Look at them little stinkers. Ha ha! Like the color code. favorite lines: Skunk One: So are we ready to devastate this garden? I got dibs on that asparagus.

Skunk Three: I'll be nibbling on the green beans.

Skunk Four: I'll be eatin' cabbages, Savages.
Whole stinking thing was hilarious. this is funky garden.
BOO-tastic!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
    Thanks, BOO
reply by BOO ghost on 16-Sep-2017
    Anytime, Mr. Bill.
Comment from Caressa_08
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It is a very interesting analogy to try to understand skunks and how they communicate among themselves, and creative thinking on your part to show how they just might interact in any given day when a vegetable garden catches their noses and appetites As we humans try to avoid these creatures...trying not to set them off to cause a smelly reaction that can really mess up our day. Though they look so cute & harmless in this photo that highlights your dialogue, giving us a glimpse what four might be thinking a lot of the time in their skunk world, as this being for many creatures, I think that feasting on a tasty meal is first & foremost.

I enjoyed the read...C.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Caressa, for making some sense out of these skunk gatherings. I appreciate your giving this a look. Bill
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Bill. Again such a cool write. I missed eight of them obviously however, this one is funny and a good write. Clever my friend.
I'm always amazed at how you think! xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Kiwi
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written skunk story. The only thing that really matters in skunk world is to know how and where to get food and a garden to ruin. No one cares about a name.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Sandra
Comment from nomi338
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I can totally relate. Over the years I have been called Roland, Noel, Nate, etc. I tell everyone, that they can call me almost anything, just don't call me late for the meal.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    Thanks, nomi
Comment from damommy
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What do you bet that poor Hank gets left out of all the good eats. Poor guy. Never could get his name in there.

I like the interaction of the four skunks, and the picture is so cute.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017


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    Thanks, da
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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haha what a fun read Bill. I love the discussion the 4 had. My favorite is stinkin' Lincoln. Thanks for the laugh. Jan

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Jan