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Truth and Fantasy

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Short stories

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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LOL what a dream and what a nightmare to wake up to thinking all was well and good. Love the twist you put into this excellently written entry

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
    Thanks! That was my goal with putting the twist at the end. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Bucketlist
I saw a bit of naughty humor in your 100 word flash.
Looks like his wife knew he was having an arousal dream

Gert

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    Yes, I think she did! Thanks for reviewing
reply by Gert sherwood on 15-Sep-2017
    You are welcome Buckelist
    gert


Comment from frogbook
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Hahahaha. What an imaginative and funny piece you have created with you few words here. He had to awake from his naughty little dream and get back to reality. Great little piece of flash fiction which I will bet comes out on top for the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    I doubt that seriously - try the usual -close to bottom! Thanks for a supportive review.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Hey there again Trish:

You are showing off your sense of humor lately. This is a very cute story abd yes, most men can only dream of that kind of reality only to be rudely awakened by the truth. (lol)

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    I had to think of something to flash fiction! I'm so glad it amused and did not offend. Thanks once more for your great review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from pbomar1115
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This story is hilarious. I've read a few short Flash Fiction and always look for to the cleverness of the story. But I was caught completely off guard on this one, which made the story that much better for me.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    Thank you! You are the first man to respond to the piece. I'm so glad it did not offend . I'm honored that you were caught off guard - that means I reached my three goals 1) humor 2) an unexpected twist in the story. 3) reader enjoyment .
    I really appreciated your review
    Trisha
reply by pbomar1115 on 15-Sep-2017
    You're welcome.

    Phillip
Comment from apky
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Great and surprising twist at the end of the story, Bucketlist.
I simply couldn't help laughing out loud. You certainly have the talent to write a story that was actually cleverly suspenseful and taut, then end it with such a wham!,
and all in one hundred and one words.

Good luck with the contest, and have a fab weekend ahead.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
    You too! Thank you so much for your complimentary review. I'm glad it brought some laughter
    Trisha