Adoration
What a lifetime of love is all about2 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your 2-4-2 poem for the contest. Your words are simple, but coupled with the photo you chose, we are reminded that fifty years is possible for anyone - all it takes is devotion.
Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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thank you for sharing your 2-4-2 poem for the contest. Your words are simple, but coupled with the photo you chose, we are reminded that fifty years is possible for anyone - all it takes is devotion.
Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from Poetic Friend
I know is very challenging to craft a poem with only eight syllables, but you executed the challenged well.
You managed to tell the readers a story about a couple who has been together for fifty years. You are correct in saying such a marriage is golden. Some couples could barely make it a year. What is the secret to longevity?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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I know is very challenging to craft a poem with only eight syllables, but you executed the challenged well.
You managed to tell the readers a story about a couple who has been together for fifty years. You are correct in saying such a marriage is golden. Some couples could barely make it a year. What is the secret to longevity?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
