Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your entry in the Starts and Ends The Same writing contest. From the presentation to your deep words, this poem is compelling. Without concrete thoughts, we are free to do whatever we want -- even fly.

Well done and good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017

Thank you, Patty, for your terrific and much appreciated review.
Don

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Mystery Poet,

This was a fun poem to read. The picture is perfect for your words. I had not heard of woolgathering in a long time. Thanks for the reminder.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017