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Comment from lyenochka
Well, this was pretty hilarious. I guess Skammer learned to be a bit more "scentsitive" after nearly experiencing Skooter's fate. Fun 'scent' puns throughout!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Well, this was pretty hilarious. I guess Skammer learned to be a bit more "scentsitive" after nearly experiencing Skooter's fate. Fun 'scent' puns throughout!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thanks, lyenochka, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute script about the little skunks. My favorite part was at the end about why did the skunk cross the road! lol Just like the chicken! Very cute wording and cute imagery! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
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This is a very cute script about the little skunks. My favorite part was at the end about why did the skunk cross the road! lol Just like the chicken! Very cute wording and cute imagery! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from nomi338
Why do I feel that I have been skammed by a skeemer? Somehow I did not see this ending the way that it did. I thought for sure that old Skeemer was a goner for sure. He must have been moving pretty fast to avoid joining Skooter.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Why do I feel that I have been skammed by a skeemer? Somehow I did not see this ending the way that it did. I thought for sure that old Skeemer was a goner for sure. He must have been moving pretty fast to avoid joining Skooter.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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The car may have taken the ditch to avoid him.
Comment from robyn corum
Bill, Bill, Bill....
Yes, this WAS amusing, and yes, it DID make me smile as I read it. But I have to admit it has me worrying about those men in the little white coats visiting you sometime in the very near future. If I were you, I'd keep the doors and windows firmly locked. Ninety Per 'Scent' of the time, this behavior will get you locked up!
hahahahahaha
I enjoyed!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Bill, Bill, Bill....
Yes, this WAS amusing, and yes, it DID make me smile as I read it. But I have to admit it has me worrying about those men in the little white coats visiting you sometime in the very near future. If I were you, I'd keep the doors and windows firmly locked. Ninety Per 'Scent' of the time, this behavior will get you locked up!
hahahahahaha
I enjoyed!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Robyn
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bill,
First I love you great play on the word scent winch adds humor to the dialogue of your script.
And how you changed old jokes but good
to fit so perfect to make me laugh.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Hello Bill,
First I love you great play on the word scent winch adds humor to the dialogue of your script.
And how you changed old jokes but good
to fit so perfect to make me laugh.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Gert
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Smiles to you Bill
Gert
Comment from damommy
I think this may be the best yet. Sounds like what skunks might say to each other, but hopefully, they'd both be a little more sympathetic. lol
I once saw a little of tiny baby skunks - obviously something happened to their mother - but the driver of the car wouldn't stop to let me get them. It's worried me all this time. 8-)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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I think this may be the best yet. Sounds like what skunks might say to each other, but hopefully, they'd both be a little more sympathetic. lol
I once saw a little of tiny baby skunks - obviously something happened to their mother - but the driver of the car wouldn't stop to let me get them. It's worried me all this time. 8-)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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I can't imagine why the driver wouldn't stop.
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She was afraid of them. I still haven't forgiven her for that.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I think I am completely de'scent'sitized after reading this little jewel. This is quite funny. I must say they are cute little creatures... if they just didn't smell so terrible. We have them come through our property at night, and believe me it wakes you up from a deep sleep. Well done and quite humorous Bill. Nancy
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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I think I am completely de'scent'sitized after reading this little jewel. This is quite funny. I must say they are cute little creatures... if they just didn't smell so terrible. We have them come through our property at night, and believe me it wakes you up from a deep sleep. Well done and quite humorous Bill. Nancy
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Nancy, for the excellent review. Bill
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You are welcome Bill. Nancy
Comment from robina1978
A well written script about two skunks. They found a dead skunk, killed by crossing the road. He crossed the road to get to the other side, I liked how you used two colours.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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A well written script about two skunks. They found a dead skunk, killed by crossing the road. He crossed the road to get to the other side, I liked how you used two colours.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Ine
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Loved this conversation between these two skunks Bill, how I would imagine it to go down..... ..........ha ha
Great fun to read, wonderful imagination
Mitchell
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Loved this conversation between these two skunks Bill, how I would imagine it to go down..... ..........ha ha
Great fun to read, wonderful imagination
Mitchell
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Mitchell
Comment from Macsween
Very good. This is a well written and funny script which I enjoyed reading. I loved the idea of skunks owing money to each other. Just where do they keep their cash?
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Very good. This is a well written and funny script which I enjoyed reading. I loved the idea of skunks owing money to each other. Just where do they keep their cash?
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Mac. I guess they keep it in the 1st National Skank.
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Excellent.
