Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Haiku(autumnal grey clouds)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from patcelaw
Zanya, this is a lovely autumnal haiku. Indeed the clouds are omens of winter coming.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Zanya, this is a lovely autumnal haiku. Indeed the clouds are omens of winter coming.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks for taking time to read and critique - winter is fast approaching !! zanya
Comment from kaymart
Lovely! The photo is perfect for this short piece. I'm really not sure what else to say, so I guess I'll need to be a bit technical?
Your syllable count per line was right on (5-7-5) and the poem itself makes perfect sense. thank you!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Lovely! The photo is perfect for this short piece. I'm really not sure what else to say, so I guess I'll need to be a bit technical?
Your syllable count per line was right on (5-7-5) and the poem itself makes perfect sense. thank you!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Just to repeat my delight on receiving 6 beautiful stars !zanya
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:-)
