Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Thank God for that, better warn the cook to be on the look. If you see a tail aimed in your direction, make the decision to change locations with a decided quickness. Failure to move hastily could put you in position to stink for a long time. I don't know if it is a fact, but if skunks hold grudges, you could be in danger.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017

I would feed a skunk something discouraging.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is just too cute what you have penned. I love the picture of this little skunk chowing down and you used very good descriptive wording. Great job! Teri

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend the humor shines through again in your well written and presented poem I am sure many people will enjoy this one well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017

Thanks, Jill

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

This gave me a giggle Bill, wonderfully written with your usual sprinkling of humour.
I particularly enjoyed the last two lines.
Loved it.....
Mitchell

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017

Thank you, Mitchell

Comment from Possummagic

Excellent

Haha you are such a comic. Another interesting tale of your skunks. What made you start writing about skunks? It can't be because you like the smell!
I can't see any typos or errors of course so I wish you well. PM

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks, PM

reply by Possummagic on 04-Sep-2017

Welcome.PM

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Ha, ha. I would call this humor or children's poetry. I think those age five and up would really laugh at the line:
she let go a vapor, polluting the air.

The reader might supply the smell. LOL

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks, Shari

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha Bill, this is a fun poem. Good job on the rhymes & smooth flow of your lines. This reads very much like a limerick. The picture is really cute. I am glad all is well now with her food. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks, Jan

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, wonderful, you do make me smile. At least she's now free to eat although she put out BO. Where the heck do you get the ideas from, I do not know. But it's wonderful. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I work in a nursing home so I have witnessed your words in action. Excellent use of words that make the poem come alive and the reader can smell the odor. You have a unique theme here.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks, mermaids

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

These poems of the skunk world are such fun. The rhyming is superb and the words hilarious. I'm glad she gets to eat her food odour free, lol, considering she was the one to let go a whiff! LOL. Well done. :) Sandra x

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks, Sandra.