Misguided(5-7-5)
Addicted17 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi
What a deep and meaningful 5-7-5 poem.
Which describes addiction with such vivid imagination.
The dramatic word play is fantastic which strengthens your statement brilliantly.
and a great picture to accompany
Mitchell.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Hi
What a deep and meaningful 5-7-5 poem.
Which describes addiction with such vivid imagination.
The dramatic word play is fantastic which strengthens your statement brilliantly.
and a great picture to accompany
Mitchell.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Too true! Well done five - seven - five is easy to understand and delivers a worthwhile warning using very few words. Excellent choice of artwork. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Too true! Well done five - seven - five is easy to understand and delivers a worthwhile warning using very few words. Excellent choice of artwork. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome
Comment from country ranch writer
Being a gambler can become very hazordeourous to ones health all one does is get in deeper and deeper with no way out ruining every thing in ones path
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Being a gambler can become very hazordeourous to ones health all one does is get in deeper and deeper with no way out ruining every thing in ones path
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your review.
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Comment from Poetic Friend
Your statements hold much truth. The addicted gambler has a believe that next game will eventually lead him to wealth. He gambles, gambles and gambles until he has nothing left to gamble. Subsequently, he gambles with his poverty.
You did an excellent job describing the lifestyle of a addicted gambler.
If your time permits, please read my poem "I Am Your Addiction."
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Your statements hold much truth. The addicted gambler has a believe that next game will eventually lead him to wealth. He gambles, gambles and gambles until he has nothing left to gamble. Subsequently, he gambles with his poverty.
You did an excellent job describing the lifestyle of a addicted gambler.
If your time permits, please read my poem "I Am Your Addiction."
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from nbonner
Nicely written Short 5-7-5 poem. When I read this I see I see an addictive gambler is trying to get out (maybe I'm wrong, sorry if I am). Love the picture chosen for this poem, makes the words come alive. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Nicely written Short 5-7-5 poem. When I read this I see I see an addictive gambler is trying to get out (maybe I'm wrong, sorry if I am). Love the picture chosen for this poem, makes the words come alive. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your review. You are right, but once caught in the addiction of gambling, you want more and more. Even if you want to get out you can't.
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Your welcome. I agree. Any addiction whether it be drugs, gambling, etc...is the hardest thing to beat. But with faith anything is possible.
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, this is addiction. This is a fine 5-7-5 which creatively expressed a message about the perils of gambling--poverty. I especially like your use of pandemonium to describe the gambler's reaction when he turns up empty-handed.
This is a fine poem. Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Yes, this is addiction. This is a fine 5-7-5 which creatively expressed a message about the perils of gambling--poverty. I especially like your use of pandemonium to describe the gambler's reaction when he turns up empty-handed.
This is a fine poem. Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is so true the person with a gambling problem no see it as that only the pound/ dollar signs until its too late good luck regards Jill
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Oh yes my friend this is so true the person with a gambling problem no see it as that only the pound/ dollar signs until its too late good luck regards Jill
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your review.
