Friendship
Acrostic-Loop46 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Life is a socialization process: on or off line. Acquaintances and friendships are important. So is love. And they always say that we should marry our best friend. Good poem. Enjoyable to read. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Life is a socialization process: on or off line. Acquaintances and friendships are important. So is love. And they always say that we should marry our best friend. Good poem. Enjoyable to read. Nice work :)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Curly Girly
Best wishes in the contest!
Yes, people do:
People crave friendship
Your words point out so many lovely things about friendship. It is such a positive thing.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Best wishes in the contest!
Yes, people do:
People crave friendship
Your words point out so many lovely things about friendship. It is such a positive thing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from JW
Thanks for sharing this poem and good luck in the contest. In reading this I could not help but recall the following song:
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks for sharing this poem and good luck in the contest. In reading this I could not help but recall the following song:
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much and for the great song
Comment from DonandVicki
I love acrostics and I will have to admit that this is the first acrostic loop that I have reviewed or heard of, nicely written.. A poem with a powerful message.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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I love acrostics and I will have to admit that this is the first acrostic loop that I have reviewed or heard of, nicely written.. A poem with a powerful message.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great advice for friendships. I like the photo. Looks
like they are having fun. Find the joy in the day and
you will gain strength. Have fun on FS. God bless!
flylikeaneagle - nancy
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Great advice for friendships. I like the photo. Looks
like they are having fun. Find the joy in the day and
you will gain strength. Have fun on FS. God bless!
flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from l.raven
a very well written poem...with a very special message...friends are so important in our lives...my father always told us to respect and love our family and our friends...they will be the ones who are there for us in the end...it's a good thing to try different forms...love your poem and love the picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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a very well written poem...with a very special message...friends are so important in our lives...my father always told us to respect and love our family and our friends...they will be the ones who are there for us in the end...it's a good thing to try different forms...love your poem and love the picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
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you are so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem has how life's parts are linked together. It is a well done loop poem but what is the other form used. The name of the contest is combination so it has to mix two forms.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This poem has how life's parts are linked together. It is a well done loop poem but what is the other form used. The name of the contest is combination so it has to mix two forms.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you, the other form is acrostic, Friendship, 1st letter of each line spells this word
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No problem. I didn't notice. Sometimes poets bold the first letters to it is more noticeable when the lines are uneven.
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No problem. I didn't notice. Sometimes poets bold the first letters to it is more noticeable when the lines are uneven.
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Comment from TAB_that's me
I don't see two different types of poetry in this as stated in the rules for this contest. I see only the loop (not sure that is what it is called but I think it is). If you change it or point out the 2 different styles to me, I will change your rating.
teresa
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I don't see two different types of poetry in this as stated in the rules for this contest. I see only the loop (not sure that is what it is called but I think it is). If you change it or point out the 2 different styles to me, I will change your rating.
teresa
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, the two styles are Acrostic and loop, Acrostic is the spelling of a word downwards with the first letter of each line, in this case, it spells friendship, many thanks
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I totally missed the acrostic. Of course it is. wonderful job. I changed your rating. you may want to add that to your author notes so everyone knows what 2 you used.
Comment from alvina224224
Great poem, author. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Friendship is a colossal
theme for anything artistic, because it, (or the lack of it), is easy to portray. I only wish friendship would be a little more contagious than it is - we desperately need an epidemic of it! Well done!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Great poem, author. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. Friendship is a colossal
theme for anything artistic, because it, (or the lack of it), is easy to portray. I only wish friendship would be a little more contagious than it is - we desperately need an epidemic of it! Well done!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from estory
I like the chain like construction of this, the repetitions of sounds and images morphing from moment to moment, in a transcendental transformation that creates an overall sense of connection. nice job with this little poem estory
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I like the chain like construction of this, the repetitions of sounds and images morphing from moment to moment, in a transcendental transformation that creates an overall sense of connection. nice job with this little poem estory
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
