Laughter's Renewal
A reunion with friends I last saw forty years ago...5 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written and beautiful it is lovely to have friendships that last reminiscing about the past and generally catching up having fun I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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This is very well written and beautiful it is lovely to have friendships that last reminiscing about the past and generally catching up having fun I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you ever so much for your kind review!
diane
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you so much for sharing your double reversed Tetractys Format. You told a vivid story of friendship, love, and shared memories. Good luck in the contest. The only nit is 'Memory's joys,' the plural of memory is 'memories.' The possessive would then be - memories'
~patty~
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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thank you so much for sharing your double reversed Tetractys Format. You told a vivid story of friendship, love, and shared memories. Good luck in the contest. The only nit is 'Memory's joys,' the plural of memory is 'memories.' The possessive would then be - memories'
~patty~
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Yikes!
Thank you so much for catching my faux pas! That's what happens when concentrating on the syllabic count...and being covered in poison ivy!
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from B.B. Rose
This is a wonderful homage to your longtime friends. Your words perfectly capture a buoyancy that comes from collective memories of our carefree (at least by now) pasts-- a revisit to those times untarnished by regret, now just uplifting mirth. So nicely constructed, I am unaware of the form.
Sorry that I'm out of six stars.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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This is a wonderful homage to your longtime friends. Your words perfectly capture a buoyancy that comes from collective memories of our carefree (at least by now) pasts-- a revisit to those times untarnished by regret, now just uplifting mirth. So nicely constructed, I am unaware of the form.
Sorry that I'm out of six stars.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you ever so much for your kind review. I love the tetractys form of poetry. Why? I have no idea! :) It's a challenge to tell a story in a structured format.
Comment from nbonner
forty-two years of friendship is a long time and would be so hurtful to lose. I currently have a friendship going on twenty-five years and I couldn't imagine losing that. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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forty-two years of friendship is a long time and would be so hurtful to lose. I currently have a friendship going on twenty-five years and I couldn't imagine losing that. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Much appreciation for your kind review!
diane
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written Free Verse/Multiple Tetractys poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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This is a very interesting and well written Free Verse/Multiple Tetractys poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Much appreciation! Thank you, Teri7
