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One Night a Year

Ghosts rise to dance one night a year.

8 total reviews 
Comment from pipersfancy
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Great overall presentation in this rhymed AABB poem - gosh! So difficult to find a rhyme to "quiet", yet here, you've done it! I can see why this piece placed well in the contest. Congratulations!
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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the read and the kind words.
Comment from TPAC
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Very exciting piece, filled with many deposited delights as one read, with creative line expressions. Strong initial beginning that sway in course of read.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from frogbook
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Great subject matter and good description in the original and enjoyable poem. "Ethereal beauty moonbeam enhanced was a nice line-good phrasing. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Possummagic
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I enjoyed your poem and the imagery was good also. Your verses rhymed well and the words were used to create a well flowing, nicely structured piece of work. PM

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the read and your encouraging words.
reply by Possummagic on 01-Sep-2017
    You're welcome PM
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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I like this entry for the 'Quiet' contest. A poem that is nicely rhymed with a story of coming out to dance as ghosts once a year. A good execution of the word 'quiet' as the very last word of the poem. Well done and good luck in the competition. ~DD

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your quiet poem "One Night a Year". You rhymed it well and I liked your choice of picture. Just one small thing - the second last line should it be ( 'tis )?
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
    Changed the tis to It's. Thanks.
reply by marybell1 on 02-Sep-2017
    Hope I was of some help.
    Marybell1.
Comment from c_lucas
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A very interesting image. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good Imagery. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Thank you for the read and the kind comments.
reply by c_lucas on 31-Aug-2017
    You're welcome.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Oh yes my friend this s well written describing ghost rising to dance which gives the sense of music playing , closing with quiet on the return to the grave good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Thank you for the read and the kind comments.