Flirtin'
a country western song19 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I think this would be a great lyric put to music, the sheer rhythm to the piece is quite exceptional, and well suited to a daring beat that could be marvellously interpreted, some great strategic rhyme, gives it more viability with a great articulate theme, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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I think this would be a great lyric put to music, the sheer rhythm to the piece is quite exceptional, and well suited to a daring beat that could be marvellously interpreted, some great strategic rhyme, gives it more viability with a great articulate theme, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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wow, Roy. thanks, and I appreciate for the good wishes.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello there. I love the lyrics to this one. It's definitely a country western song and I can visualize you at the bar, drinking a couple, dancing with some strangers and missing your faithless girl. Good luck. I liked this one. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Hello there. I love the lyrics to this one. It's definitely a country western song and I can visualize you at the bar, drinking a couple, dancing with some strangers and missing your faithless girl. Good luck. I liked this one. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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thanks. glad you like it
Comment from EverInParadise
The lyrics are well done. I can almost hear it being sung. Good luck in the contest.
The art you chose looks like the gal in the song. Nice job.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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The lyrics are well done. I can almost hear it being sung. Good luck in the contest.
The art you chose looks like the gal in the song. Nice job.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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thanks! wish you wrote music. :)
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You're so welcome.
Comment from nbonner
I don't think I've heard the song before but I like your version. It's hard to say goodbye to someone you once loved over something they had control of correcting. Well written, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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I don't think I've heard the song before but I like your version. It's hard to say goodbye to someone you once loved over something they had control of correcting. Well written, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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thank you. just made it up. wish I could write music. this is not a rewritten song. thanks for your good wishes.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Well done on writing these lyrics for the Lyrics Make The Song contest. I'm sure it's not an easy task but you managed to write one on love gone bad. Walk away now while the goings good as once a flirt always a flirt. Good job and best of luck for the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Well done on writing these lyrics for the Lyrics Make The Song contest. I'm sure it's not an easy task but you managed to write one on love gone bad. Walk away now while the goings good as once a flirt always a flirt. Good job and best of luck for the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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thanks for your good wishes. I just made it up - nothing personal.
Comment from luther maddox
much pain in this work, someone has had their heartbroken over time by this one person. This I have learned in life, when we express pain as such in a song, it usually is about someone we had loved, and a breaking point has been reached, or breached.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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much pain in this work, someone has had their heartbroken over time by this one person. This I have learned in life, when we express pain as such in a song, it usually is about someone we had loved, and a breaking point has been reached, or breached.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Bless you, Luther. what a feeling person you are. I hate to tell you, but I just made it up. Most all my stories, etc are pure fiction, though some are real. But it makes me feel really good that the lyrics had that effect on you! That's the purpose. You have made my day! Thank you!
pome lover
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from my heart, thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks lover's frustration and complaining against lover's flirting nature and dismantling love and lover is leaving the flirt making fake lover, I like the lyrics.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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This speaks lover's frustration and complaining against lover's flirting nature and dismantling love and lover is leaving the flirt making fake lover, I like the lyrics.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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thanks, and I like your "flirt making fake lover". very good!
pome lover
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well-written song lyrics. When a partner is flirting with others it causes friction between the couple. The one who's innocent must take all the hurting to a point where they had enough and decides it is.time to end the relationship.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Very well-written song lyrics. When a partner is flirting with others it causes friction between the couple. The one who's innocent must take all the hurting to a point where they had enough and decides it is.time to end the relationship.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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thank you!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
These are pretty good Song Lyrics, my friend. They surely go great in a country western beat. Doesn't it seem country songs are always about leaving someone, lol.
Well, my friend, you're better off without her. Once a flirt, always a flirt, in both, men and women. just seems to be in some peoples blood, and they don't care how it hurts others at all. Their karma will come back to them hopefully, lol. ~Kerry
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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These are pretty good Song Lyrics, my friend. They surely go great in a country western beat. Doesn't it seem country songs are always about leaving someone, lol.
Well, my friend, you're better off without her. Once a flirt, always a flirt, in both, men and women. just seems to be in some peoples blood, and they don't care how it hurts others at all. Their karma will come back to them hopefully, lol. ~Kerry
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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thanks. wish I could put them to music. I need a guitar-playing friend.
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lol, there are places you can submit lyrics without the music, where someone else does that part. Good luck.
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will have to Google it. thanks
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:) k, let's see who you are mystery writer, maybe I'll PM you with a fantastic place to do so. lol, I'll tell you anyway's but not on public reviews. HA-Ha, sorry. It's a production company I've been working with, everything is needed, writing, animation, illustration,acting,etc... everything and anthing for a production.pretty amazing. I just started with them. all payable.
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well, that sounds great. check me out. :)
I wrote the lyrics for fun. I am not male - but probably already told you that.
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Omg, I'm sorry, you didn't say you were female, it's a blind entry, didn't know, lol
