Robin Redbreast
Nonet writing prompt5 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the Animal Nonet contest. The Robin is a great choice of animal and you have done a good job describing this beautiful bird of nature. An excellent picture chosen too to represent this well written piece. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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This is a good entry for the Animal Nonet contest. The Robin is a great choice of animal and you have done a good job describing this beautiful bird of nature. An excellent picture chosen too to represent this well written piece. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Dear DD, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from jenintorre
I liked this little poem very much. I thought that the words were very well chosen and precise and I felt the atmosphere of the theme. Good work.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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I liked this little poem very much. I thought that the words were very well chosen and precise and I felt the atmosphere of the theme. Good work.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Dear jenintorre, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from bsmath
The picture of the robin chosen for the poem is very beautiful. Everything you said about robins is true. You also used an entertaining choice of words. The part about earthworms might need to be improved. Very good!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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The picture of the robin chosen for the poem is very beautiful. Everything you said about robins is true. You also used an entertaining choice of words. The part about earthworms might need to be improved. Very good!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Dear bsmath, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good imagery that nicely
describes the robin and what
you like about it.
-I like the line about being a guest.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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-Very nice image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good imagery that nicely
describes the robin and what
you like about it.
-I like the line about being a guest.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Dear Pam, Thank you for your comments and review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from nbonner
Birds are such unique animals. It's amazing how they can make one place their home, they might fly away, but they always return. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Birds are such unique animals. It's amazing how they can make one place their home, they might fly away, but they always return. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Dear nbonner, thank you for your comments and review.
