Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This lanture, Follow the Path, seems to allow that for a person to advance in a holy life, it is necessary to persue that course steadfastly. So true. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks for the kind words and high rating.

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Comment from donforclearn

Excellent

This poem is well written. The image of destiny is excellent. A person really hearing their destiny reminds this reader of following one's path. Good Luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you for reading and commenting. Both are much appreciated.

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Comment from RodG

Excellent

I believe any religious person on this site will truly love the simplicity of this poem and its emphasis on faith--"following God's voice." I am not sure, however, what your title is trying to convey.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you very much

Comment from Liberty Justice

Exceptional

SIX STARS to you dear poet. What a powerful statement you made and I feel the spiritual overtone as I determine the full meaning in my mind. Seems it has a calling and eternal forever viewpoint. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you for the kind words. I am honored by the six star rating.

Joan

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

This is truly beautiful! In so few words, you tell a story! I am pleased to have come upon this poem. I wish you luck in the contest. So many great entries. Blessings to you my writing friend. Drew

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I appreciate the good luck wishes.

Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about destiny to the course of living as it is destined per God's wish and to continue the state of living as per God's voice to the destination; now and forever; I liked.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you.

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good Lanturne poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks for taking the time tor read and review and for the good luck wishes.

Joan