Natural Light
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Ahhhhh estory: This is all so lovely. I love this poem and this is another different poem than what you normally write. It is so expressive and the words are so marvelous. They make me fall in love with what you are describing. It really makes me think about the beauty in the natural lights. Even your Author notes are so wonderfully said and poetic. Below are some of my favorite lines. NICE...
Unfolding into the soft, pale colors of the dawn
Illuminating each and every blade of grass
And holding the beauty of the shapes of leaves,
We reach a plane of stillness, attained at last
Above the concrete of the streets
Where we stand, looking into the distance
Natural light; soft, ethereal, bittersweet,
A beauty alive for one moment, and then lost
Into shadow, into memory,
Where the moment resonates and echoes
In the beauty of the present,
In the sunlight and the moonlight,
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Ahhhhh estory: This is all so lovely. I love this poem and this is another different poem than what you normally write. It is so expressive and the words are so marvelous. They make me fall in love with what you are describing. It really makes me think about the beauty in the natural lights. Even your Author notes are so wonderfully said and poetic. Below are some of my favorite lines. NICE...
Unfolding into the soft, pale colors of the dawn
Illuminating each and every blade of grass
And holding the beauty of the shapes of leaves,
We reach a plane of stillness, attained at last
Above the concrete of the streets
Where we stand, looking into the distance
Natural light; soft, ethereal, bittersweet,
A beauty alive for one moment, and then lost
Into shadow, into memory,
Where the moment resonates and echoes
In the beauty of the present,
In the sunlight and the moonlight,
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you again for this amazing six star review it is much appreciated. glad you enjoyed this poem so much estory
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi
This is such a wonderful read, capturing the image of light brilliantly, very neatly presented.
Nice musical throughout, very imaginative and impressionistic.
The imagery painted just draws the reader in and takes us on a lovely ride.
Absolutely fantastic.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Hi
This is such a wonderful read, capturing the image of light brilliantly, very neatly presented.
Nice musical throughout, very imaginative and impressionistic.
The imagery painted just draws the reader in and takes us on a lovely ride.
Absolutely fantastic.
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and for all your comments supporting the poem. It was fun to write and I am glad you enjoyed it. estory
Comment from Irish Rain
This is just gorgeous. Should have been entered in a contest, you bring it all to life. Twilight is so lovely, and fleeting. Beautiful, blessings....
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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This is just gorgeous. Should have been entered in a contest, you bring it all to life. Twilight is so lovely, and fleeting. Beautiful, blessings....
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you for this excellent review and for your wonderful comments supporting this poem. I am glad you found it so inspiring and uplifting, that was the intent of this write estory
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Estory. I think this is one of the most beautiful pieces I have seen of yours. You have captured the essence of a moment in time that dissolves into perfection. How wonderful that must feel. Well done xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Hi Estory. I think this is one of the most beautiful pieces I have seen of yours. You have captured the essence of a moment in time that dissolves into perfection. How wonderful that must feel. Well done xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you for this excellent review and for all your encouraging comments about the poem. I am glad you enjoyed it so much and got into this uplifting moment of nature and light estory
Comment from luther maddox
with the artistic values of Thoreau, this work exhibits the invitation to the imagery of an autumnal dance of leaves, as the changing skies and myriad sunsets give way to dreams. this is an excellent creative work and happy to read it.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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with the artistic values of Thoreau, this work exhibits the invitation to the imagery of an autumnal dance of leaves, as the changing skies and myriad sunsets give way to dreams. this is an excellent creative work and happy to read it.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and for your encouraging comments supporting this poem. I am glad you found it so uplifting. thrilled to be compared with Thoreau. It is a very romantic pastoral poem, really estory
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avec plasir with pleasure
Comment from Joan E.
You captured ethereal moments and wove them marvelously into a "quilt"--the perfect metaphor. I was transported and felt myself "opening like a flower" to the natural beauty. Well done- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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You captured ethereal moments and wove them marvelously into a "quilt"--the perfect metaphor. I was transported and felt myself "opening like a flower" to the natural beauty. Well done- Joan
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you again so much for the six stars, I really appreciate the support and the encouraging comments estory
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a beautiful piece on natures beauty, my friend. You did a terrific job in your descriptive words, I love the line you closed it with,
"Stitched together in the quilt of time,
With all of the colors of the living sky."
-Beautiful. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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This is a beautiful piece on natures beauty, my friend. You did a terrific job in your descriptive words, I love the line you closed it with,
"Stitched together in the quilt of time,
With all of the colors of the living sky."
-Beautiful. ~Kerry
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thanks for the excellent review and all your encouraging comments supporting the poem. Glad you enjoyed it so much estory
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your very welcome.
Comment from Auto-Manic
a beautiful read. Nice wording flow and use of descriptive passages that revolve as the world turns, which I believe was the name of a soap opera back in the 60's but this has much more class.
nice job
AM
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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a beautiful read. Nice wording flow and use of descriptive passages that revolve as the world turns, which I believe was the name of a soap opera back in the 60's but this has much more class.
nice job
AM
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and for all the encouraging comments supporting this poem. Glad you enjoyed it so much estory
