Comment from nomi338

Excellent

They say that when you mention the devil he soon appears. That having been said, this is a devil of a story development and it has quickly gone straight to hell. With that I say, good night to all and to all a good night.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Thanks, I think.

reply by nomi338 on 28-Aug-2017

When you are at a loss for words, suitable words that is, it is best to say as little as possible to avoid embarrassment.

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Hi there, Bill

Watch Monty Python, much? This very much reminded me of their wonderful bonkers antics.

LOved it :)

much love

trimple

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Thank you, trimple. Monty Python was a great discovery back when I watched The Avengers, The Saint, Faulty Towers, and other terrific British imports.

reply by trimple on 28-Aug-2017

ahhhhhhhh!

The good ole days' eh :)

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha, I'm laughing so hard, Bill. It's a scream. I absolutely love it. You are so clever with words. Only one little thing. There has to be a full stop before: There is a search for a mole All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you, Ulla. I'm glad you got a laugh. I fixed that period. Bill

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

I am not really into scripts, but yours was a joy to review. I mostly liked the wordplay on mole, like a spy and a mole on the skin. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks, Ine

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a cute scene you have penned but some of it I didn't understand, but that is just me. Very cute wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from damommy

Excellent

This is certainly a different twist on the mole world, and a funny one. Good job.

Smitty has me confused with all his sharp remarks. Got himself arrested.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks, da. He ain't smart.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend you have done well again a play on words that made me laugh you are very talented my friend I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thank you, Jill, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

This piece is comical. Smitty does not make it easy for himself to get to the thirtieth floor. By attempting to confuse Man, the guard at the metal detector, he winds up getting arrested.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks, pbomar, for giving this a look. Bill

reply by pbomar1115 on 26-Aug-2017

You're welcome, Bill

Phillip

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Bill, Bill, Bill....

What were you eating when you wrote this, my friend? *smile* It is a silly and fun look at a very stupid man (or a very wise one acting stupid!) Either way, it was fun! Thanks!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks, Robyn

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

hello Bill. What a grand ending for your mole series. I have to apologize as I didn't get to all of them. I like the series. Will it be a book at some point? Good luck my friend. xoxo deborah

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks, kiwi. I suppose if I can talk someone into publishing horse, spider, octopus, sloth, and mole worlds together it might get done.