Keeping Time
A walk with friends.2 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks that one is not perfect, as he finds, experiences in course of walking with friends, how others point out often, he does not like so many things of others, but he is free; I liked.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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This speaks that one is not perfect, as he finds, experiences in course of walking with friends, how others point out often, he does not like so many things of others, but he is free; I liked.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you. I which I was perfect, but I am free to write. I try to speak softly because my foot lives in my mouth. :)
Comment from EverInParadise
A very interesting poem though I admit I missed the storyline of what you are trying to say. The rhythm and rhyme are very good. Your final line is stellar. I watch my hands an find them quite fascinating. How well you state your case.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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A very interesting poem though I admit I missed the storyline of what you are trying to say. The rhythm and rhyme are very good. Your final line is stellar. I watch my hands an find them quite fascinating. How well you state your case.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you. My fingers are out of shape. My life has taken many roads, but I keep walking forward.
