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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Section 5 - Part 2: Exhumed"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Oh my goodness Brett:
How awful, I have never heard anything like this before. To bury a cat in the dirt with his head only exposed then to torture it by mowing his head with a lawn mower, is such an evil and disgusting act. This Earl Schroder is the Devil himself and I totally feel so awful for Cody. He will need therapy for years after going through what he did in living with his creep of a bio-father.
This story is continuing to be so interesting. I believe that Earl is still alive and faked his death. There is someone else in that grave.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Oh my goodness Brett:
How awful, I have never heard anything like this before. To bury a cat in the dirt with his head only exposed then to torture it by mowing his head with a lawn mower, is such an evil and disgusting act. This Earl Schroder is the Devil himself and I totally feel so awful for Cody. He will need therapy for years after going through what he did in living with his creep of a bio-father.
This story is continuing to be so interesting. I believe that Earl is still alive and faked his death. There is someone else in that grave.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate your comments, support, and the review.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Brett.
Very well written, mate. What a sad state of affairs when a poor little cat gets that sort of treatment and the young Cody cops it as well. The guy's a monster.
Sorry I'm so far behind, I can't keep up with life at the moment.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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G'day Brett.
Very well written, mate. What a sad state of affairs when a poor little cat gets that sort of treatment and the young Cody cops it as well. The guy's a monster.
Sorry I'm so far behind, I can't keep up with life at the moment.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Indeed Ben of the site for several months and accordingly, have missed a lot of this story. This chapter kept my attention throughout. I cringed at the cat mowing, and have to winder where did that come from? Horrific acts humans are capable of. Gripping fiction.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Indeed Ben of the site for several months and accordingly, have missed a lot of this story. This chapter kept my attention throughout. I cringed at the cat mowing, and have to winder where did that come from? Horrific acts humans are capable of. Gripping fiction.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
That scene was intended to demonstrate the depths of Earl Anthony Schroder's insanity.
Appreciate you taking the time to read this and to write a review.
Much more co come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from emptypage
Yep. I've heard of that particular for of torture for cats and dogs all my life, but I've never known anyone to actually witness such an act. Drowning pups or kittens in a bag, I've seen. People are so effing cruel.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Yep. I've heard of that particular for of torture for cats and dogs all my life, but I've never known anyone to actually witness such an act. Drowning pups or kittens in a bag, I've seen. People are so effing cruel.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's tale and insight into Earl Anthony Schroder's insanity.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Rasmine
Brett,
Good writing. The description of the cat abuse was very good writing. I have to tell you a story.
My mother's best friend was mowing her grass one day. Her young son was playing in the yard. She didn't watch where she was going. You can imagine what happened. Lorraine has been messed up ever since. :( I wanted to know more about my mother. I called her but she wouldn't meet with me. So, lawn mowers can do real damage. Your writing shows that and is very truthful to me.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Brett,
Good writing. The description of the cat abuse was very good writing. I have to tell you a story.
My mother's best friend was mowing her grass one day. Her young son was playing in the yard. She didn't watch where she was going. You can imagine what happened. Lorraine has been messed up ever since. :( I wanted to know more about my mother. I called her but she wouldn't meet with me. So, lawn mowers can do real damage. Your writing shows that and is very truthful to me.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story and insight into Earl Anthony Schroder's insanity.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from BOO ghost
This is amusing... Has Cody's worst nightmare from Hell become his reality? Can Sheriff Daniels keep him safe? okie dokie. I noted this: depict the insanity of Earl Anthony Schroder. BOO's favorite paragraph: "Sheriff, I'll have Debbie immediately forward an Order under my signature authority to Paul Cartright, the new Sheriff over in Palo Pinto, to exhume Earl Anthony Schroder's grave. Based on what quarter-pint has just informed me of, I want to see what is inside that casket for myself. Since Earl Anthony Schroder fancies lawnmowers so much, now he's got one he won't be able to handle. Me. I'll mow his grass alright! Oh, and by the way, Sheriff. You may want to be there when that grave is exhumed."
All reads good and gets BOO's attention. Nicely written.
BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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This is amusing... Has Cody's worst nightmare from Hell become his reality? Can Sheriff Daniels keep him safe? okie dokie. I noted this: depict the insanity of Earl Anthony Schroder. BOO's favorite paragraph: "Sheriff, I'll have Debbie immediately forward an Order under my signature authority to Paul Cartright, the new Sheriff over in Palo Pinto, to exhume Earl Anthony Schroder's grave. Based on what quarter-pint has just informed me of, I want to see what is inside that casket for myself. Since Earl Anthony Schroder fancies lawnmowers so much, now he's got one he won't be able to handle. Me. I'll mow his grass alright! Oh, and by the way, Sheriff. You may want to be there when that grave is exhumed."
All reads good and gets BOO's attention. Nicely written.
BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This was very nice to read. There was a line that didn't seem quite right to me. Everything else was interesting to read though. I always look forward to reading your work.
Kat
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett,
This was very nice to read. There was a line that didn't seem quite right to me. Everything else was interesting to read though. I always look forward to reading your work.
Kat
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Always appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Octavia
Well written generally. Some spags - more editing needed.
Eg:
Don't say you weren't warned!' he did. (said?)
Oh, and by the way, Sheriff. You may want to be there when that grave is exhumed." (comma after Sheriff and lower case on you)
Truly horrific tale of evil incarnate.
Good luck with your book!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Well written generally. Some spags - more editing needed.
Eg:
Don't say you weren't warned!' he did. (said?)
Oh, and by the way, Sheriff. You may want to be there when that grave is exhumed." (comma after Sheriff and lower case on you)
Truly horrific tale of evil incarnate.
Good luck with your book!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate the catches.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, thank you for the warning. This story is very graphic, especailly this paragraph:
He told the Judge, "If Earl Anthony Schroder caught a meower under the trailer, and he would set traps for them, he'd bury it in the ground up to it's neck, with it's head sticking out of the hole he buried the cat in. Then, he'd go get the lawnmower, pull the cord that engaged the engine, and fire it up. No more pussycat!"
I cringed as I read this story.
Presumably, this is a fictional story. However, just to think that there are people who as evil as the person described in your story.
Wow, what a story!
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Wow, thank you for the warning. This story is very graphic, especailly this paragraph:
He told the Judge, "If Earl Anthony Schroder caught a meower under the trailer, and he would set traps for them, he'd bury it in the ground up to it's neck, with it's head sticking out of the hole he buried the cat in. Then, he'd go get the lawnmower, pull the cord that engaged the engine, and fire it up. No more pussycat!"
I cringed as I read this story.
Presumably, this is a fictional story. However, just to think that there are people who as evil as the person described in your story.
Wow, what a story!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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This is all fictional, and is actually the third one of my Cody Schroder books.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of his story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along. Many FanStorians do.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Sorry had to skip the first half, just have had to rescue so many cats that the nightmares are already sometimes more than I can handle. But the rest was perfect and adds to the story
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Sorry had to skip the first half, just have had to rescue so many cats that the nightmares are already sometimes more than I can handle. But the rest was perfect and adds to the story
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
I tried to take the little whippersnapper to the bottom depths so that the rest of the story can build him back up again.
