Plea
It is what it is...13 total reviews
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Plea". You had all your lines correct for this genre and I liked your message for peace.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Plea". You had all your lines correct for this genre and I liked your message for peace.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi Marybell1, thank you for your lovely feedback. Regards, Debra
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You are most welcome
Marybell1.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Debra. This is a plea that everyone has on their lips and in their hearts--for peace to reign on earth everywhere. It all starts with each of us to lead by example. Much luck in the contest with this fine Lanturne entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi Debra. This is a plea that everyone has on their lips and in their hearts--for peace to reign on earth everywhere. It all starts with each of us to lead by example. Much luck in the contest with this fine Lanturne entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi Marilyn, hi lulubethank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both. Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Lulube
Well, well, Mrs. White. You have returned and right into a contest;. good for you. and I feel this poem for more than the words, knowing you are in England and Tamara as well. She phones me everytime something happens over there so I'm not worrying. I hope you do not live near all of this havoc? I still don't get what the hell they (terrorists) think they are getting out of all of their actions. Just pure destruction for nothing.
glad you are here and voicing.
lulube good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Well, well, Mrs. White. You have returned and right into a contest;. good for you. and I feel this poem for more than the words, knowing you are in England and Tamara as well. She phones me everytime something happens over there so I'm not worrying. I hope you do not live near all of this havoc? I still don't get what the hell they (terrorists) think they are getting out of all of their actions. Just pure destruction for nothing.
glad you are here and voicing.
lulube good luck in the contest
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi lulube, thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both. Yep, it's a crazy and scary world we live in. We live about an hour or so away from where the Manchester arena attack happened a couple of months ago. I know people who were at the concert that night. It's too close to home and every time I switch on the news, I'm waiting to hear there's been another attack.
Good to hear Tamara is well, hope you are too.
Best wishes, Debra x
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well i'm glad to hear that you and family are out of the main towns being hit. Can't wait for tamara and andy to move back. hopefully before the end of the year. nice to see your work again
lulube
Comment from patcelaw
Debra, this is a lovely messaged lanturne for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I had not seen anything from you for a while. I do hope you will continue to post your lovely works. Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Debra, this is a lovely messaged lanturne for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I had not seen anything from you for a while. I do hope you will continue to post your lovely works. Patricia
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi Patricia, thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both. I've been away from the site for a while, I hope to have found some time to spend back here again! Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from rama devi
My favorite themes...love and peace. The artwork enhances the message implying an avenue to burning bright love and feeling peace is to help those who are suffering. Plea is a perfect title. Brilliant combination of words and image. Good luck in the contest. Tasteful and impacting presentation.
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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My favorite themes...love and peace. The artwork enhances the message implying an avenue to burning bright love and feeling peace is to help those who are suffering. Plea is a perfect title. Brilliant combination of words and image. Good luck in the contest. Tasteful and impacting presentation.
Love,
rd
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi rama, thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both 😀 Kindest regards as always, Debra hi
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:-)))) Kindest regards!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Debra,
This is a great contest entry. The colors work well with your image & well chosen words. Good job on the syllable count per line as required of the lanturne style. Your few words carry a lot of weight.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Debra,
This is a great contest entry. The colors work well with your image & well chosen words. Good job on the syllable count per line as required of the lanturne style. Your few words carry a lot of weight.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi Jan, thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both. Kind regards, Debra
Comment from gsuarez
The most beautiful prayers are ones such as this: pithy, succinct. Pleas that come from the heart always speak to the Heart. Very well penned.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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The most beautiful prayers are ones such as this: pithy, succinct. Pleas that come from the heart always speak to the Heart. Very well penned.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Regards, Debra
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lanturne poem. We can only plea for people to open their hearts with love to spread through the world to make it a better place and bring forth peace.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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A very well-written Lanturne poem. We can only plea for people to open their hearts with love to spread through the world to make it a better place and bring forth peace.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you Sandra for your kind feedback.
Regards, Debra
Comment from RodG
Such a simple request, but conveyed eloquently in but nine words.
Good focus on how love works: it "burns" and "radiates."
I like how you personify LOVE, making him the listener here who hopefully will honor your request.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Such a simple request, but conveyed eloquently in but nine words.
Good focus on how love works: it "burns" and "radiates."
I like how you personify LOVE, making him the listener here who hopefully will honor your request.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Hi Rod, thank you for your thoughtful feedback. I appreciate it.
Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Heather Knight
The world does indeed need the peace you talk about in your poem. And what best way to achieve it than through love?
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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The world does indeed need the peace you talk about in your poem. And what best way to achieve it than through love?
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you sos much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards, Debra
