Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Author,

I really love this whole presentation. The image is a lovely beginning, and I had to think - it will be hard for a poem to match this beauty... But you did it. *smile* I've read all the entries, and yours gets my vote. Great job!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017

Thank you, Robyn, for your read and your kind words.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem about the moon. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the great picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017

Thank you for the read and your comments.

Comment from nbonner

Excellent

Without even mentioning the moon, I could feel myself walking on the beach with the moon overhead lighting up the sky. I liked. Good luck on the contest

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

Thank you for your read and the comments.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

The picture chosen could not be more perfect for enhancing your poem.
Good enjambment of lines 1 & 2 as reader SEES the tides rolling in.
"Silvering" is a great verbal for describing the tides' action.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

Thank you for the read and the comments.