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A Far-fetched Fable

60-Word Flash Fiction Contest Entry

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This sixty-word story, A Far-fetched Fable, has the appropriate word count and is an unashamed description of the forty-fifth president of the United States. You have captured his story well in your version. I hope his time as president is as short.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Had to laugh at this one. You could never write about this stuff without the original nut! I think this is cleverly written and entertaining. I didn't see anything to correct so good luck! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
    Thanks again, Kiwi! A laugh is a smile with some happy noise, so you know I'm tickled pink by your reaction to my 60-word fable.
Comment from tfawcus
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Unbelievable! Who could possibly have dreamed up such a far-fetched tale? Not your usual rags to riches fairy story, but rather one of the child of riches reducing the country to rags, or so it seems.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2017

Comment from zanya
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An interesting angle on a modern day - reality tv show /reality show ???? event in the history of our world- who knows where fantasy and reality meet - crossover - interesting pic ??

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2017