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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Section 4 - Part 1: Legal Beagle"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Oh okay, so there is a chance that Earl is still around and the body in the grave is not really him. The Sheriff will be allowing Cody to post up Wanted posters all over town. Well, as I said I would be more worried about letting Cody walk around so freely. This creep could be anywhere but to each their own. This story is still interesting. I find my self arguing with just certain decisions that adoptive parents seem to be making about letting Cody come and go on his own but I am a very paranoid parent.
I am happy that beth is buying Cody the baseball mitt though.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Oh okay, so there is a chance that Earl is still around and the body in the grave is not really him. The Sheriff will be allowing Cody to post up Wanted posters all over town. Well, as I said I would be more worried about letting Cody walk around so freely. This creep could be anywhere but to each their own. This story is still interesting. I find my self arguing with just certain decisions that adoptive parents seem to be making about letting Cody come and go on his own but I am a very paranoid parent.
I am happy that beth is buying Cody the baseball mitt though.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Allowing Cody to do more things on his own adds another level of suspense to the storyline.
You never know what danger may lurk around the next corner and snatch him.
I always try to have some sort of twist to my chapters, so you never know what may occur.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
It was very nice to read more about Cody. Also it is wonderful to learn more about him too. I know when Beth gives Cody the glove he's going to be very happy.
Kat
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett,
It was very nice to read more about Cody. Also it is wonderful to learn more about him too. I know when Beth gives Cody the glove he's going to be very happy.
Kat
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Don't worry, I'll continue to keep reading about Cody. It's always so
interesting.
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I will be looking forward to read more about Cody. They are wonderful to read.
Comment from emptypage
I missed where Beth got OUT of Cody's good graces. What happened? I don't know how I could have missed a part.....
Now I'm wondering more and more about the standoff--who, when, and where. In town. At home? Is Beth going to get hurt?
Ahhh... waiting. Good chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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I missed where Beth got OUT of Cody's good graces. What happened? I don't know how I could have missed a part.....
Now I'm wondering more and more about the standoff--who, when, and where. In town. At home? Is Beth going to get hurt?
Ahhh... waiting. Good chapter.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Beth got out of Cody's good graces in the second Cody Schroder book that I called Legs, when she left him, Astatula, and Sheriff Daniels behind.
Upon her return in this book, Cody is having a hard time forgiving her. After all, she was the one who rescued him in his hometown of Palo Pinto and brought him to Astatula. This occurred in his first book I called Astatula.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Brett.
"judge's steel gardens" very creative. Liked that phrase.
It's refreshing to find a writer who knows how to use words that make a reader want to read. I'm sure you are getting quite tired of me blathering away with how I feel about your writes as opposed to any real constructive critiques. I simply can't find any Brett. Your writing is polished and each chapter gives enough to satisfy and still leave a reader wanting the next chapter. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett.
"judge's steel gardens" very creative. Liked that phrase.
It's refreshing to find a writer who knows how to use words that make a reader want to read. I'm sure you are getting quite tired of me blathering away with how I feel about your writes as opposed to any real constructive critiques. I simply can't find any Brett. Your writing is polished and each chapter gives enough to satisfy and still leave a reader wanting the next chapter. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
so Cody was still mad at her for leaving? Nicely done and I know the mitt will be significant later for some reason. No problems noted and again an excellent write
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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so Cody was still mad at her for leaving? Nicely done and I know the mitt will be significant later for some reason. No problems noted and again an excellent write
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
As I tell you, I really do appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
It is readers who enjoy my little creations that make me want to keep penning them.
Comment from Possummagic
I'm enjoying your story about Cody. I like your writing, it's fluid and well structured and your editing is done well and continually. I get frustrated when people say that they will edit aT the end of the chapter or worse at the end of the book! Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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I'm enjoying your story about Cody. I like your writing, it's fluid and well structured and your editing is done well and continually. I get frustrated when people say that they will edit aT the end of the chapter or worse at the end of the book! Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sankey
Good work once again. Very descriptive and had us hanging to see if he was gonna get picked up by Earl who is supposed to be dead. No spags and of course, a totally great read.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Good work once again. Very descriptive and had us hanging to see if he was gonna get picked up by Earl who is supposed to be dead. No spags and of course, a totally great read.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
