Contest Collage
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "if found, please notify me asap"keep your hope alive....
27 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Some think they choose their muse
It is the other way around
Your muse chooses you
To help you grow
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
  |
Some think they choose their muse
It is the other way around
Your muse chooses you
To help you grow
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
-
so true! thank you Lucas :-)
-
You're welcome
Comment from Thesis
A very powerful piece. I enjoyed reading this and letting it allow my mind to wander. Wander lust can be empowering, forcing one to exceed their expectations of what they will/can experience. Not coming back, could be quite an interesting ride.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
|
A very powerful piece. I enjoyed reading this and letting it allow my mind to wander. Wander lust can be empowering, forcing one to exceed their expectations of what they will/can experience. Not coming back, could be quite an interesting ride.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
-
Lol. Thank you thesis :)
Comment from wilkswrites
I love it. Well thought out. Very creative. I love how you made your point so very creatively. These are so difficult for me, because I have to count words, and make the poem make sense. You did a fabulous job.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
 |
I love it. Well thought out. Very creative. I love how you made your point so very creatively. These are so difficult for me, because I have to count words, and make the poem make sense. You did a fabulous job.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
-
Thank you wilks :-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha what a fun entry for the contest--love it.
Good job, Mystery Poet, on the correct syllable counts per line.
niether--->neither
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
|
haha what a fun entry for the contest--love it.
Good job, Mystery Poet, on the correct syllable counts per line.
niether--->neither
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
-
will fix that now! Thank you Jan :)
Comment from Cass Carlton
This I can relate to. My Muse often takes off for places unknown leaving no forwarding address, a contact number or any idea as to when she might return. Then, just when I'm about to give up in disgust for the umpteenth time, she saunters in. She drops a word (or two) and the light dawns. I reach for the pen or the keyboard and begin to write. We are putty in the hands of our Muse, my friend.
Your Haiku is syllable perfect and expresses the feelings of every fellow writer in a clear, somewhat resigned tone. We all feel that way at some time or another. The muse always returns to where it finds an outlet. Until then my friend grin and bear it.cheers Cass
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
|
This I can relate to. My Muse often takes off for places unknown leaving no forwarding address, a contact number or any idea as to when she might return. Then, just when I'm about to give up in disgust for the umpteenth time, she saunters in. She drops a word (or two) and the light dawns. I reach for the pen or the keyboard and begin to write. We are putty in the hands of our Muse, my friend.
Your Haiku is syllable perfect and expresses the feelings of every fellow writer in a clear, somewhat resigned tone. We all feel that way at some time or another. The muse always returns to where it finds an outlet. Until then my friend grin and bear it.cheers Cass
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
-
Lol! Thank you Cass :)
Comment from rama devi
Very clever. Creative. I think the muse is still intact!
I like the unique voicing and use of caps in line one, though I suggest not capping the first word of line two (for smoother enjambment). I also recommend not capping Mind (I found it distracting rather than augmenting). Optional, of course.
Good luck in the contest. I imagine it will prove a strong contender.
Warmly, rd
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
|
Very clever. Creative. I think the muse is still intact!
I like the unique voicing and use of caps in line one, though I suggest not capping the first word of line two (for smoother enjambment). I also recommend not capping Mind (I found it distracting rather than augmenting). Optional, of course.
Good luck in the contest. I imagine it will prove a strong contender.
Warmly, rd
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
-
Got it! Will fix! Thank you Rd :-)
-
:-)))
Comment from Teri7
Now this is a very neat lost poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
|
Now this is a very neat lost poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
-
hehe thank you Teri :-)
