Signs of Autumn
contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
a lovely hopeful poem with lots of flair for the future season
love the rhyme scheme
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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a lovely hopeful poem with lots of flair for the future season
love the rhyme scheme
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Dear smiileycloud, Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem to show that autumn is in the air. The school bells ring, the books are open and the summer holiday is over. The harvest is about to take place.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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A very well-written poem to show that autumn is in the air. The school bells ring, the books are open and the summer holiday is over. The harvest is about to take place.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from beizanten
A good picture. A good first paragraph, good imaginary. A lighthearted second paragraph. Third paragraph is good, make me hungry. Overall a very good poetry. Keep up the good work
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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A good picture. A good first paragraph, good imaginary. A lighthearted second paragraph. Third paragraph is good, make me hungry. Overall a very good poetry. Keep up the good work
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Dear beizanten, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from zanya
Yes isn't Autumn just so 'magically alluring' with its array of activities - sights and sounds and smells as the year moves along to its dormant season -beautifully captured here
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Yes isn't Autumn just so 'magically alluring' with its array of activities - sights and sounds and smells as the year moves along to its dormant season -beautifully captured here
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Dear zanya, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Ogden
Your rustic Autumn is colorful, without breaking the rules. You make it sound very inviting in your neck of the woods.
Good luck in the voting.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Your rustic Autumn is colorful, without breaking the rules. You make it sound very inviting in your neck of the woods.
Good luck in the voting.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Dear Ogden, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely done - especially for the restriction on the colors of autumn. A good job of focusing on the events and lifestyle changes of Autumn. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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Very nicely done - especially for the restriction on the colors of autumn. A good job of focusing on the events and lifestyle changes of Autumn. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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Dear Thal1959, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting poem you have penned for the Autum with no any colors mentioned contest. You used very good wording and great imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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This is a very interesting poem you have penned for the Autum with no any colors mentioned contest. You used very good wording and great imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review.
