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Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Section 3 - Part 3: Calling Card"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, I enjoyed this well written chapter. Every seemed so peaceful, and then comes the blow. A grim reminder of the past. Not so good. All thee best. Ulla:)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett, I enjoyed this well written chapter. Every seemed so peaceful, and then comes the blow. A grim reminder of the past. Not so good. All thee best. Ulla:)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Just like in life sometimes when all is peaceful that is undoubtedly when something disastrous seems to occur.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
I had already read this but I waited for today to put my reviews in so I could finally give you my first six of this glorious Sunday. awesome , awesome work my friend I normaly never read stories I'm a poet kind of girl but this story is magnificent. I'm HONORED TO GIVE YOU THIS SIX TODAY
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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I had already read this but I waited for today to put my reviews in so I could finally give you my first six of this glorious Sunday. awesome , awesome work my friend I normaly never read stories I'm a poet kind of girl but this story is magnificent. I'm HONORED TO GIVE YOU THIS SIX TODAY
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate your comments, support, reviews, and the six stars.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning Brett: I was just saying to myself, as I was reading your story, 'Shouldn't the Sheriff and Cody be more afraid for him to be walking around so freely and unafraid - so soon after his abduction and return to his new home?' I think I would be so worried that Earl Anthony Schroder would pop up again, trying to steal Cody.
I am still following this story, eager to see what will happen.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Good morning Brett: I was just saying to myself, as I was reading your story, 'Shouldn't the Sheriff and Cody be more afraid for him to be walking around so freely and unafraid - so soon after his abduction and return to his new home?' I think I would be so worried that Earl Anthony Schroder would pop up again, trying to steal Cody.
I am still following this story, eager to see what will happen.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Cody has not been abducted, yet. Will he be? That remains the question.
Appreciate you taking the time to read this portion of Cody's story and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from emptypage
Hey BMW, good chapter. Maybe
I was wrong. Maybe it won't wait for the camp. Maybe... the crescendo begins here. Maybe the story's climax is in the barn.
Wherever it is, I'll be waiting.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Hey BMW, good chapter. Maybe
I was wrong. Maybe it won't wait for the camp. Maybe... the crescendo begins here. Maybe the story's climax is in the barn.
Wherever it is, I'll be waiting.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Never know what may happen next, so yes, I do invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow the games begin and I sure hope this will be the last we see of this evil character when the story is over and we can breath again. Very well done
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Oh wow the games begin and I sure hope this will be the last we see of this evil character when the story is over and we can breath again. Very well done
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This is another great part of the book you are writing. I enjoyed reading it as
usual. I'll be looking for more of it. You are wonderful at writing all kinds of
things. I always look forward to reading more as I enjoy what you write.
Kat
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett,
This is another great part of the book you are writing. I enjoyed reading it as
usual. I'll be looking for more of it. You are wonderful at writing all kinds of
things. I always look forward to reading more as I enjoy what you write.
Kat
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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I will be looking forward to the next part of Cody's story. Kat
Comment from apky
Other than the suggestions below, a great story that continues as well as it had began.
It was then he noticed a small piece of cardstock laying beside the door he had not noticed when he entered the barn.
- this sounds a bit "off". How about: It was then he noticed a small piece of cardstock [he had not noticed when he entered the barn, laying beside the door]Just a suggestion.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Other than the suggestions below, a great story that continues as well as it had began.
It was then he noticed a small piece of cardstock laying beside the door he had not noticed when he entered the barn.
- this sounds a bit "off". How about: It was then he noticed a small piece of cardstock [he had not noticed when he entered the barn, laying beside the door]Just a suggestion.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate the suggestion. Keep them coming. Helps keep my writing more focused.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello,
Good description of the morning:
He found serenity in listening to the mockingbirds trilling the arrival of a new dawn. The chaparral surrounding their property was kissed by the dew. Little rainbows appeared as the sun slowly touched its wetness.
He never regretted Cody slept comfortably (Maybe you could reword this. It just seems awkward).
Good chapter. I knew something was up -- it was too happy :P
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Hello,
Good description of the morning:
He found serenity in listening to the mockingbirds trilling the arrival of a new dawn. The chaparral surrounding their property was kissed by the dew. Little rainbows appeared as the sun slowly touched its wetness.
He never regretted Cody slept comfortably (Maybe you could reword this. It just seems awkward).
Good chapter. I knew something was up -- it was too happy :P
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
In Astatula, something is always up.
Therefore, I invite you to ride along as this story unfolds.
Comment from Sankey
Wow! I came in on this chapter before, but I realized I had missed the previous one.
I am guessing worse is around the corner. Now some spags.liked how [the] his diamond blue eyes
['](")The silly mutt probably went chasing the ring-necked pheasants and ruffed grouse again,['](")
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Wow! I came in on this chapter before, but I realized I had missed the previous one.
I am guessing worse is around the corner. Now some spags.liked how [the] his diamond blue eyes
['](")The silly mutt probably went chasing the ring-necked pheasants and ruffed grouse again,['](")
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate the nit catches. Keep them coming.
