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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Section 3 - Part 2: Calling Card"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning Brett: Oh I'm not liking this phone call that Fernando Augustus just made. There will be more trouble for this poor little boy from a buyer in Boston. This is just horrible. This boy will be separated from his father again to be sold? I hope that it's not his Bio-father but no- doubt he is behind the sale of Cody in some way.
I am hating this happening to this poor boy. This story is well written and I know that it is happening in real life situations such as this, all over in this world of ours.
I am continuing to follow...have a great day!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Good morning Brett: Oh I'm not liking this phone call that Fernando Augustus just made. There will be more trouble for this poor little boy from a buyer in Boston. This is just horrible. This boy will be separated from his father again to be sold? I hope that it's not his Bio-father but no- doubt he is behind the sale of Cody in some way.
I am hating this happening to this poor boy. This story is well written and I know that it is happening in real life situations such as this, all over in this world of ours.
I am continuing to follow...have a great day!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Who knows what Cody may be put through before it is all over with?
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sankey
Thought I read through this before but I can see I did not get right through it. Thanks for more excitement. I did wonder if the Ristorante owner might have been crook.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thought I read through this before but I can see I did not get right through it. Thanks for more excitement. I did wonder if the Ristorante owner might have been crook.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from emptypage
Well, dammit. I knew he was going to use the camp, I just didn't anticipate it would happen so quickly.
Looks like it's going to be a wild ride. I'll be hanging on.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Well, dammit. I knew he was going to use the camp, I just didn't anticipate it would happen so quickly.
Looks like it's going to be a wild ride. I'll be hanging on.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from BOO ghost
B00's favorite paragraph:
"It's been four days since Cody's encounter with Earl Anthony Schroder," Sheriff Daniels remarked. He glared at Cody and said in no uncertain terms, "I want you to pick that menu up off the table where you placed it, right now. You are to open it up and order yourself something to eat, even if it is only a bowl of the cheddar cheese soup you like so much."
BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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B00's favorite paragraph:
"It's been four days since Cody's encounter with Earl Anthony Schroder," Sheriff Daniels remarked. He glared at Cody and said in no uncertain terms, "I want you to pick that menu up off the table where you placed it, right now. You are to open it up and order yourself something to eat, even if it is only a bowl of the cheddar cheese soup you like so much."
BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Sometimes, even the best boys need to be properly parented.
That was the angle I attempted to convey in this portion of the story.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow and what money does to people. You have given us another twist to the story and help from an unexpected source, but then money is money. Very well written
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Oh wow and what money does to people. You have given us another twist to the story and help from an unexpected source, but then money is money. Very well written
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
So true that money is money and it can cause many people to do all kinds of terrible things.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
This is another great part of your story about Cody. You're so wonderful writing
about him. Thank for letting me know what the Italian words meant too.
I always enjoy reading about Cody and look forward to reading more.
Kat
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett,
This is another great part of your story about Cody. You're so wonderful writing
about him. Thank for letting me know what the Italian words meant too.
I always enjoy reading about Cody and look forward to reading more.
Kat
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
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You're very welcome. I'm looking forward to reading more about Cody.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
IF I HAD ASIX FOR EVERY STORY I HAVE READ OF YOURS I WOULD GIVE THEM UP TOO YOU.SO I LEARN A LITTLE ITALIAN ON THE WAY BUT I'M NOT ASTORY READER BUTT I HAVE BEEN READING THIS ONE I HAVE NOT COMMENTED ON THEM BECAUSE I HAD NO SIXES TO GIVE. VERY IMPRESSIVE
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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IF I HAD ASIX FOR EVERY STORY I HAVE READ OF YOURS I WOULD GIVE THEM UP TOO YOU.SO I LEARN A LITTLE ITALIAN ON THE WAY BUT I'M NOT ASTORY READER BUTT I HAVE BEEN READING THIS ONE I HAVE NOT COMMENTED ON THEM BECAUSE I HAD NO SIXES TO GIVE. VERY IMPRESSIVE
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Brett. I think I must of missed something cause I don't know this fellow who wants Cody as a "fine specimen" Good action going on. Sheriff talking to Cody felt realistic and you could feel the vibe going on. Well written chapter. I'll have to go back and see if I can find out why Cody is in danger of a kidnapping ... xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hello Brett. I think I must of missed something cause I don't know this fellow who wants Cody as a "fine specimen" Good action going on. Sheriff talking to Cody felt realistic and you could feel the vibe going on. Well written chapter. I'll have to go back and see if I can find out why Cody is in danger of a kidnapping ... xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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He has not been identified yet.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello! :)
Good chapter!! It's intriguing, and I can't wait for the next, tomorrow. I like that you keep the chapters short.
I have one suggestion; that you use the name 'Cody' only when you can't use 'him' or another pronoun because it can be overused. (I have this same problem).
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hello! :)
Good chapter!! It's intriguing, and I can't wait for the next, tomorrow. I like that you keep the chapters short.
I have one suggestion; that you use the name 'Cody' only when you can't use 'him' or another pronoun because it can be overused. (I have this same problem).
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
